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Scorch215


Greetings all and welcome to my page. I tend to write stories of a darker nature though I enjoy reading a wide range of stories. I hope you find something of interest here, have a good day.

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God damn it, man, it's 11:00 at night and I have work tomorrow! Stop updating everything and posting new stories in minutes of each other!!!!

darn i was siding with the three minutes. Or in honor of Rainbow Dash 10 SECONDS FLAT!:rainbowwild:

7344610 ah yeah. Hadn't thought of THST.

I like the premise... Consider me interested!
Let's hope Chryssy is ok, and the 2 foals too. Twilight though, might have an unpleasant awakening.
I especially look forward for a CTS VS ETS duel.

7344703 glad to hear I'm still able to come.up.with interesting story ideas THST keep everyone interested.

Going to be interesting following following The Commander on this journey.

you should link as a sequel ( or leave a link in the last story's description) it will help boost views by making it easy to find, (disregard this if you already planned to do so).
stay awesome:rainbowdetermined2:

7344813 I do plan to but I don't know where to find the story ID number for the last story and have been looking since I uploaded this

I for one would've thought the commander had ways to counter sleep spells.

7345728 she does but she was completely blind sided and it was fast acting hard to activate a spell when you are losing consciousness at an alarming rate and cane barely form words

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Yeah that would do it, first thing about saves in D&D, have to be aware of something to save from it.

one question will cts use the mantis and warthog she got in "Commander Twilight Sparkle’s Adventures through the Multi-verse":pinkiecrazy:

7345770 the only aspect for Multi-verse THST is cannon is Dawn do to the simple fact I liked the character and so wanted to have her in tjr main series

7345805 oh will i wanted to see how ETS's troops would react to the superior tech of the UNSC:fluttershysad:

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I think the Empress' troops would be shot like sitting ducks.

In case there is a duel of fates, is the Commander going to meet an opponent who can beat her? This would sure be interesting...
I also wonder how old will the Empress be? I envision her as lithe and taller (like Luna?) For some reasons.

7345939 if I did that I might as well post to story as a one shot as they couldn't stop the Mantis or any of the other gear CTS has gained in that side fic already. I wouldn't hsbr a story

How many years have passed since the previous story?

7346450 its been a decade since Violet Flame was born

This is really good so far, and I can't wait to read more of it. :pinkiehappy:

FEATURED JUNE 28TH, 2016, THE DAY AFTER UPLOADING!!!

Why is this a thing? Who made this a thing?
Not the story being uploaded. I mean the shallow act of stating that it was.

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Because the story hand even been up for 8 hours and I tend to freak out when things like this happen because I have no clue as to why the stories are popular and I like to remebr when stories reach milestones

Level one means the Crusader allows ground forces and standard security personal to deal with the situation and make a few suggestions.
Level Two the Crusader will support ground forces with automated defenses under the control of the computer.
Level three is the extremely rare instance where a threat is so massive it overruns all friendly ground forces. At this level the Crusader will into full automated defense, bringing everything it has from automated turret, UAVs, laser grids designed to slice through all but the densest materials know to ponykind, blast doors, fire suppression system as well as anything else it can use to repel the attack. Level Three had never been reached by any attacking force yet as it would take a significant event for the Crusader Mainframe to reach this level, nothing short of another Nightmare Moon incident to Tirek could trigger this response. Should a Crusader activate a Level Three responds even an alicorn would have trouble reaching the computer core to shut down the system.

Level Four was a top secret clandestine program that was created in the event that Level Three was insufficient to deal with the threat. However, due to the treasonous act of Private Ed Maning, the existence of Level Four had been revealed to all of Equus and posted on WikiLeaks.
Level Four, it was revealed, had been developed by the renowned Dr. Weirdshoe and consisted of the ready recreation of the infamous "Noodle Incident" held in perpetual standby until such need to activate Level Four.
Within days of the information leak, the other nations--the Griffon Empire Aerie, the Dragon Nation Lair, the Minotaur Republic Maze, and the Harpy's Socialist Democratic Nest--all disbanded their standing armed forces and retired all weapons that were rated higher than a standard crossbow. These were retained for dealing with civil unrest and monster incursions.
WikiLeaks' founder, Julihoof Asno, the fate of Private Ed Maninig after his arrest and trial to this day remains shrouded in secrecy.

7346677 out of every comment concerning the Crusader Mainframes I can say with 100% certainty THST this sir.

Has absolutely surprised me and my only response is ":rainbowhuh:"

This seriously need an editor. The story is good and the pacing is good, content is quite succulent. However, there are many grammar mistakes and spelling errors that could be fixed with some proofreaders or an editor.

7346750 working in it just as soon as some issues on my end are felt with so I can esmeble a team to release onto my fics

i would like to do a vote
who is for twilight being the empress in this universe?
and who is for cadence being the empress?

godd beginning my favorite psycopath returned

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Do we really need to vote? The spoiler is in the story picture.

FOR THE LOVE OF FUCKERY!!!

Happily living with her Family and personal student within the Castle of Friendship just outside of Ponyville the Commander and her family was enjoying another typical day filled with Court as well as the bureaucracy of running an army when her day gets interrupted in an unexpected way.

Repaired!

Happily living with her Family and personal student within the Castle of Friendship, just outside of Ponyville. The Commander and her family was enjoying another typical day filled with Court, as well as the bureaucracy of running an army; when her day gets interrupted in an unexpected way.

Even this makes it not a run-on-of-oh-my-gawd!!! Please... stop this madness... :'(

Thanks, HeavensRaptor :heart:

P.s. I have not read your story for fear I will go mad due to this blatant run-on in your description.

I can haz Picture for Violet Flame? You don't need to get one but I would like make

Small request.
When making a new paragraph, are you please able to separate them by more than a single return (enter)?
It makes for much easier reading, especially on digital devices.

Well, that happened... Interesting start, gotta find more about this verse.

Wow, that first Noble just didn't know when not to try.

The cover art got me thinking. Do you plan on having the Commander get the body type like how Cadence or Fleur Dis Lee. Just wondering. Also i think that would be interesting if that actually happen in the show

7348097 if you want to make art for the story go for it (I want a copy though)

And yes Violet Flame defentlu need a picture of her.

7348118 not on mu cell phone. It is written with spaces between the paragphas as it is hard to read. But my laptop wasn't wanting to let me load the fics (kept having errors) and after an hour I just saved it to an email draft then copied it and uploaded it with mu cell phone.

Don't know why mu cell phone delete the spaces but I'm working on repairing them whenever my laptop will let me actullu save changes to an uploaded fic.

7348160 some nobles are none to bright and think because they are nobles thru are right.

Plus had to show how CTS runs her courth

7348202 way o see it CTS will slowly grow till she is about the size of the other Alicorn as my head cannon is THST is how aliconrs work it just takes a long time do to the agelessness

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HAHA, Very funny... I can't draw.

This was Freebie make by my friend.

7348456 well THST was mean to get my hope up at some art of Violet.

But seriously if I do get art of anything in this series I'll be posting it all in a blog

Congrats on the feature!

I'll be honest i hope to see a lot of Violet and Dawn in this story.

7348049 thank you for the repair. It will be done as soon as I am able to (on a cell phone and not going to attempt to repair anything while on it)

7348538 you will. They are going to be(if I can help it) be major characters in this little fic.

Glad you like them. :twilightsmile:

They really should put a bell on that mare.

7349381 and give her a whistle so they can find her easier. :rainbowlaugh:

Dammit, I can't read this without proper spacing. When paragraph spacing is left out I get headaches... I was hoping to continue reading the series.:fluttercry:

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