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YAY!
Wow, that guy has the personality of angry boiled shoe leather.
"Ugh, fine, yeah, I'll help you."
Nope really I was ok with this all the way until now
Welp, if he joins the royal guard then i'm gone. I like the idea that he does things his own way. Him joining the royal guard would just ruin it.
7363772 I guess we'll have to see.
Why do I have this nagging feeling that Celestia is going to do something stupid?
7364046 The next chapter will be out soon, so we get to see how things go.
for someone who wanted to ease into revealing himself that was a pretty quick easing into but i digress so yeah story definitely needs work but better than the last one also ehy would he explain his backstory to himself like this "And that's pretty much what happened. It's not a detailed explanation, but it's just a quick summary." Aided talked to himself while holding the rod "After that, I woke up here, near someones car." its kinda like hes breaking the fourth wall talking to us i think this would be a more of a flashback kinda thing where he comments something funny or sad instead of saying that's how it went down. One last thing i agree with MuzaWaza it would kinda suck unless he had his own thing in the guard
7364417 ok
celestia is plotting something
He trusts to fast and he also is to apologetic I mean they were the ones who waltzed right into his house and even read through a little of his things if I'm not mistaken. That is a breach of privacy if I ever saw one and even if they didn't know it was his home it is just common sense NOT to read through stuff that isn't yours.
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(imitates Chris Walken's voice) I've noticed, you do this a lot, with your commas. By any chance, is your real name, Christopher Walken?
8306039 not all angels have wings dude