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Shadow Kick


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This story is a sequel to The Seal


(If there are any spelling mistakes, or if something doesn't make sense, send me a message immediately!) (Remember! This story was written before Legend of Everfree was finished.) When the girls hear that Camp Everfree is about to close, Rainbow Dash talks to her father, who happens to be friends with an employee of Kaiba Corp. He suggests a charity tournament to Mr. Kaiba, and he grants it. Since Sunset won at the Friendship Games Tournament, she is the current title holder. So now, 16 duelists from around the globe will battle each to see who gets to duel Sunset for the championship crown. But one of the duelists seems to have his eye on Kaiba's company. Now, Sunset and her friends must find out why. If not, the camp is done for. Next story is Friends Beyond Time.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 18 )

Wow the Blueblood hate is strong with this one:ajbemused:

7333124 I just thought he would be good for this role.

7333162 it gets old seeing all the hate he gets when he really didn't do anything bad. There are far better people to fit the role you needed.

7333395 I hated Blueblood back then, but not so much now. He just looked similar to Siegfried von Schroeder. So he got the role.

Blueblood should ether go kill himself or go FUCK himself

7346489 Don't worry, his own aunts and cousin got him arrested. Lots of stuff could happen in prison.

nice chapter, though it would've been nice to have gotten even a glimpse at the cards in the good doctor's deck: I would suggest either http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Trojan_Horse or http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Nurse_Reficule_the_Fallen_One

not bad, but a suggestion or two for at least a glimpse at some of the other duelists we've seen so far:
Ahuizotl: assuming that Daring Do is as much of a rival in this world as she would be in the pony world, I can assume that he would have either a deck centered around either Fabled or Artifact cards, depending on what his rival would more then likely carry...
Golden Grape: Photon, as it fits with what we can assume is a flashy lifestyle
Shadow Shape: Dark World, as it seems to fit what little we've seen of his personality

not a bad chapter: just one minor hiccup though:

“Now I activate Fiend’s Sanctuary to special summon a Metal Fiend Token. Then I’ll tribute it to summon Kaiser Dragon in defense mode. Be mindful of its effect, if you destroy it, I can return one of your dragons back to your hand. I end my turn.”

um, I think you mean Kaiser GLIDER; no really, have a look:
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Kaiser_Glider
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Kaiser_Dragon

nicely done; also:

Cadence then walked over to Leon.
“I’m so sorry, cousin Cadence!” said Leon. “I didn’t know about his plan, honest!”
“I know, nobody blames you,” said Cadence as she hugged him. “You always were my favorite cousin.”

honestly, given what the competition is (or possible lack thereof, seeing how I can't recall too many other candidates), I can't say I blame her...

7512839 Thanks man, I fixed the Glider problem.

Hey, I changed the beginning and the very end of this story! Let me know what ya think.

Some pretty good duels. Garble's a loser, Sweetie came close, and Trixie was utterly annihilated. Now it's down to two and i hope Vlad bites the dust.

7792679 Just read and see. Glad you like the duels.

In the series Mai got an invitation to participate but after the whole "seal" thing she declined because she had to do some thinking which left an open spot for Yugi's grandpa.

So leo's a frightfur user, so am I and the funny thing about us is we may appear harmless and cuddly but when the time is right we unleash our real terror!

It's far from over. You know I was reading something the other day about chess which said you should protect your pawns because the pawns have the most potential out of any piece on the board. All this time everyone's been focusing on the knight who's been blasting his was through piece after piece, now the night is gone but what if a pawn has just gotten into enemy lines and is now ready to check the king or perhaps I should say queen.

"Amdnarg Htims" o "Grandma Smith"?

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