I like to build and draw my own designs. I make armor, weapons, and toys out of metal and leather. I like reading and writting books.
Teotle and Nyx are faced with an enemy. One whom they thought to be long gone. However, his shadow still lingers in the far corners of equestria, but that is the least of Teotle worries. He worries that Nyx Might be growing up too fast.
Nyx was made by Penstroke from the story "Past Sins." Please give credit where and to whom it is due.
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I wonder want that gift contains. Cute start
Thanks. I think it's a great way to start one of many questions that need answered in the future.
put them out or put them
except
for
Thanks man, I'll look into that right away.
don't even know about yet.
what could possibly go wrong
7469045 I look up the mistakes you brought up and fixed them. Thanks.
7469090 you're welcome
Nice. Keep up the great work
7469425 Ok, thanks
right
ok Teotle I think its time I got out my whip and started beating larger chapters out of you. but good chapter anyways
7498132
Ok, I'll try to fit in more content. Thanks.
either remove so or remove enough
change semicolon to apostrophe ( ; to ' )
Really nice chapter Teotl great job
7498132 Thanks for the help, buddy.
7503554 Thanks pal.
from
and the chapter title is not great
do you want me to preread for you?
7530766 Sure, how do you do that?
7530823 if you have a google account just copy and paste onto google docs and share with this email beacjere@gmail.com i will be able to suggest edits or if you enable editing i will be able to fix them for you.
7530971 Ok, thank you.
Great writing, Hunter! The suspense is there and I'm wondering who left the small red and white wrapped gift and what exactly is in the package? I look forward to reading more and finding out.
7550807 Thanks, but how do you know my name?
are you my councilor from Lorenzo Walker?
correction to the authors note the email is beacjere@gmail.com
What exactly is that weird doglike thing in the picture?
7551224 Sorry about that, it wouldn't let me copy and paste your original note.
7551582 Which picture?
7554289 thats fine
Editors note. if you find any mistakes do not hesitate to blame me (beacjere) for not spotting it. as usual please contact Teotle or me at +beacjere@gmail.com
Sorry about the wait, everypony.
Man those two chapter were awesome. Keep it up
I'm on it! lol
Sorry for the wait everypony, I've had family over for the past few weeks now for the holidays.
Rest assured, I'll do my best to get this book done soon. Thanks again for reading and I'll talk to you later.
I'm back baby!
Sorry that this chapters a little short. This was literally all I had left to write.
Wow. That was an awesome ending. And you left it open for another one. Nice
7932513 Did you like the lullaby?
7933592 Yup i sure did
Hey everypony, its ya boy, Teotle. I wanted to update the lullaby, "Son Under The Moon."
The original sounds more like a poem, than a song. So I am going to replace it with a shorter and simpler version. The music/melody in which to sing this song is based off of a song "Walking Through The Night" made for the game Rakuen. I hightly looking into this awesome game.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nHWyfnFF8KY