I love this keep going

Definitely an interesting story, but so far as clop with plot goes, could definitely use a lot more clop. The stuff in the last chapterr with the Zebra was great, for example, sex and torture and eventually death. It's just a shame that scene seemed to be so unique in this so far, it has a lot of potential.

Cliffhanger....
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THE ULTIMATE LIFE FORM HAS BEEN BORN!

I am loving this story.

There will be more FemDom then just that one blowjob, right?

Cliffhanger. I need help. Some more chapters would help me climb back to safety.

Huh. Looking at this again after ages, even if it's only the title... While I made no secret in the past I cared very little for Lyra... I do still want to see where it goes from that accursed cliffhanger. I mean, does she just smack them away and walk off, since now she doesn't NEED to eat as she has in the past, nor are they even a threat? Does she maim them? Does she slaughter them? ... Can she please not do the cruel squirrel moment, considering personally I felt that was at odds with Kars saving the dog in JJBA? XD

Eh, you're busy, stuff happens in life, simple as that.

Soldier: This fic is DED! Amen.

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If this were to be continued, then we know that Daring will probably send Lyra to space(through sheer dumb luck!) where she will eventually stop thinking.