Hm... Still am one of those idiots that can't just sit back and enjoy, particular with her... selective... morals.
Plus, I'm now less reminded of any of the Pillar Men and more of that outright evil slime-maid from Overlord. -_- I'm sorry, dude. Basically, I'm one of those that think "Why bother following this character if she's just going to be a complete monster?"
Something along the Eight Deadly Words trope.
Lyra is a complete monster.
The Griffons were all dicks.
Anyone I could have cared for is either dead or off-screen.
And any "fetish" appeal is basically dead in the wake of how casual and evil she is about it all. She enjoys making them struggle in vain, even if they've done little more than defend themselves. Hell, her first victim after her wake-up didn't even do anything to her.
I kinda still want to follow in the hopes of her developing and no longer being such an unrepentant monster. The horrible early life she had doesn't excuse this much at all. As it stands, she's... bland. Boring.
Just discovered this and thoroughly enjoyed reading it through. The story is rather cut-and-dry with the ancient terror brought back angle, but you've done some quite interesting world building with the griffons and the whole Mexicolt stage, really made this quite... cinematic. And despite what the other reader said about her coming across as completely a monster, the fact she interfered to help that mare and let her leave, as well as ignoring Daring until she attacked her suggests otherwise. Even the griffon she was happy to spare until he tried to one up her. Definitely curious as to what this gem will do for her since she seeks it so eagerly. Honestly though mostly read through for that delicious fetish content, all that killing with just her breasts is certainly delicious. Hope to see more boob action in the chapters to come, heh.
7580998 To be completely honest, a bit of it is my fault. I have amended the main story description to warn ahead of time about the gratuitous murder. I also want to point out that this was never 100% for the story. If it seems weak...well...you're not wrong. I'm not necessarily trying to write an amazing world with a diverse cast of characters that you'll grow to love and hate and cry over. I'm trying to write shameless clop. Nothing more, nothing less. And to be honest, as you have been saying, there's no way to justify a lot of this logically without a HELLUVA lot of this and that and that's not what I am writing this for.
This whole shebang started with one simple gripe. No one made the kind of clop I wanted to read. So, after an extremely long time of searching and waiting I decided "eh, fuck it, I'll do it. But better. With blackjack and hookers!" (exceptnotliterally)
I'm sorry if this isn't what you wanted. But you could always take my approach and just write your own version if that would satisfy you. I don't particularly give a damn if you 'steal characters or ideas or whatever'. Go for it. Or don't. Or write your own completely different story. With character development, better writing, better world building, blackjack, and hookers! The world is your oyster. Except for this little tiny plot of land right here. This is my shameless clop. And I intend to clop furiously. I hope you understand. i also hope you clop but ya know whatever...
An unstoppable monster is unleashed from its prison.
Not a fan of anthro (so not going to vote up or down) but please, for the love of little green apples, correct the short description.
Hm... Still am one of those idiots that can't just sit back and enjoy, particular with her... selective... morals.
Plus, I'm now less reminded of any of the Pillar Men and more of that outright evil slime-maid from Overlord. -_- I'm sorry, dude. Basically, I'm one of those that think "Why bother following this character if she's just going to be a complete monster?"
Something along the Eight Deadly Words trope.
Lyra is a complete monster.
The Griffons were all dicks.
Anyone I could have cared for is either dead or off-screen.
And any "fetish" appeal is basically dead in the wake of how casual and evil she is about it all. She enjoys making them struggle in vain, even if they've done little more than defend themselves. Hell, her first victim after her wake-up didn't even do anything to her.
I kinda still want to follow in the hopes of her developing and no longer being such an unrepentant monster. The horrible early life she had doesn't excuse this much at all. As it stands, she's... bland. Boring.
Just discovered this and thoroughly enjoyed reading it through. The story is rather cut-and-dry with the ancient terror brought back angle, but you've done some quite interesting world building with the griffons and the whole Mexicolt stage, really made this quite... cinematic. And despite what the other reader said about her coming across as completely a monster, the fact she interfered to help that mare and let her leave, as well as ignoring Daring until she attacked her suggests otherwise. Even the griffon she was happy to spare until he tried to one up her. Definitely curious as to what this gem will do for her since she seeks it so eagerly. Honestly though mostly read through for that delicious fetish content, all that killing with just her breasts is certainly delicious. Hope to see more boob action in the chapters to come, heh.
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To be completely honest, a bit of it is my fault. I have amended the main story description to warn ahead of time about the gratuitous murder. I also want to point out that this was never 100% for the story. If it seems weak...well...you're not wrong. I'm not necessarily trying to write an amazing world with a diverse cast of characters that you'll grow to love and hate and cry over. I'm trying to write shameless clop. Nothing more, nothing less. And to be honest, as you have been saying, there's no way to justify a lot of this logically without a HELLUVA lot of this and that and that's not what I am writing this for.
This whole shebang started with one simple gripe. No one made the kind of clop I wanted to read. So, after an extremely long time of searching and waiting I decided "eh, fuck it, I'll do it. But better. With blackjack and hookers!" (exceptnotliterally)
I'm sorry if this isn't what you wanted. But you could always take my approach and just write your own version if that would satisfy you. I don't particularly give a damn if you 'steal characters or ideas or whatever'. Go for it. Or don't. Or write your own completely different story. With character development, better writing, better world building, blackjack, and hookers! The world is your oyster. Except for this little tiny plot of land right here. This is my shameless clop. And I intend to clop furiously. I hope you understand. i also hope you clop but ya know whatever...