War is what made Earth and Humanity, what it is today. War is not strange to us. We are use to the Gore, the Weapons of Mass Destruction, the Death. But Equestria is not, they don't know what War can really feel like, and Twilight is the first.
7393617 wow...that means a lot man...mind telling me what parts you liked and also what parts i could improve on so i can keep all you guys entertained?...
oooo I like this it starts before D-Day hell yeah take that twilight see how you can survive the most destructive war in history
7392681 glad you like it
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Am I correct in assuming that Twilight will be badass in this story?
Sugar... riiiiiiiight.
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Still you blow me away with this amazing story. If you ever need any help or a proofreader please let me know. I love this story!!
7393617 wow...that means a lot man...mind telling me what parts you liked and also what parts i could improve on so i can keep all you guys entertained?...
Found a few mistakes
Twilight wings shivers
*Twilight's wings shivered
"Is it that pink-pony."
Add a question mark at the end
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I just loved how you didn't make the characters annoying like a lot of other people do. You sure know how to write a story.
You need to revise these more. I suggest attaining a proof reader for mistakes, because there's a lot of em' regarding sentencing n' such.
The story is pretty alright though so far.