Look what this chapter did to me
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Now everybody keeps asking why I've got such a dumb smile on my face

This chapter was posted while I was reading the prologue. So when I went back to my unread favorites I was like:

Sweet Celestia.....

That was incredible, sir, take my like and favorite!

And who exactly do they know, Rainbow Dash? I have few ideas,

(takes a gander at the profile picture to the left.)

Great...absolutely great. I've read a few clopfics and this is definitely the best I've read so far.
Let's sum up:
connects to canon? check!
Authentic? check!
OC that could also be canon? check!
romance? check!
expression of feelings during intimate scene? check!
Authentic "what happened afterwards"? check!

So far, this story is awesome. However I'm a bit worried. This chapter was extremely detailed...I hope the other don't look all the same. At least you have to imagine 5 other scenarios.
Waiting fo rmore.

Applejack dear, this is Sweet Potato, he’s the number one name in the potato business.
And this is his lovely wife Rosemary, and their son, Chip!

So he is a potato chip?
And why does a potato farmer know how to buck trees?

Score. Glad this came out before I have to head to work.

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That is indeed the joke.
And I figure bucking is something that comes naturally as a defensive reflex to any equine creature. To direct it at a tree instead of an approaching threat, especially for a sentient thinking creature, doesn't seem too farfetched. Applejack's just got the refined talent for it, and Chip is.....being a 8-10 year old boy trying to show off to girls.

Glad everyone's liking this so much!

loved it!
For some reason I think Rainbow's first time was secretly with macintosh.. hehe...
keep up the good work!
I'll be patiently waiting for the next one while reading some other stories.

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Equestrian potatoes grow on trees.

man...i don't even...wtf...you manged to make smut...sweet?! you sir, are a genius, and I can hardely wait for the next chapter

Very nice

Liked it so far, hope the slight change in vocabulary etc wasnt just in my head but you personalizibg the writibg style for every pony :D keep up zhe good work.

That brought up such a lovely boner. Thank you.

Dude, I think this is the first clopfic that really conveyed the emotions behind their love-making. Well done sir, this is by far the best emotional clopfic I've read yet. I only hope Rainbow's story has emotions as well, along with a genuine feeling of love towards the colt (or mare) like Applejack had, instead of just a "I scored with a Wonderbolt!"

786185 My thought too

The most hearts I have ever given a story.

More please?

Wonderful! I can´t wait for next story, and it will be Dashiee..

By the way, you have misspelled one word, here, almost at the end of story :
“Yaaaay, Dashie! I can’t wait to hear the awesome sexy time you had with your special sopmepony!

Oh sweet Celestia! That title!

The best four words of this chapter: Chip rolled with it i.qkme.me/35c09q.jpg

Dude, that was AWESOME!

This was awesome! It felt very authentic and real to the characters, and the clop wasn't over the top at all. Looking forward to the next chapter very much so.

Wow dude! This was an excellent portrayal of Applejack and even though it was clop, you made it very sweet and thoughtful. Please update soon!

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Thanks for the note, fix'd now.

Glad to see all the positive responses! Fear not, more's well on the way.

thats so wow Applejack I mean

When are you doing twilght.

PS unicorns can have 2 forms of climax I think you need to use both normil and horn climax.

*EPIC GENTLMAN TOP HAT TIP*
excellent chapter, my good man.

It has heart, it has story, it has very detailed sexy time...
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The first thing I thought about when I read about the Potato-family was the Dutch word for potato, "aardappel" which roughly translates to earth-apple. Thus my name for this ship is aardappel.

LOL Pinkie Pie

I have been waiting for Dash's part, and now that I know It's the next chapter, IM SO FUCKING EXCITED.

"I think you broke Fluttershy"
I don't know why, but that line stood out the most for me. Trying to suppress giggles right now. <i>very</i> well written, though I admit I skimmed over the, uh, main bit in the middle. Still, very nice and I can't <i>wait</i> for the next chapter!

I must say this story madw me side split and my teeth hurt from the pure sweetness.

I like where this is going... Looking forward to certain stories more so than others, though. But that's just me.
But definitely liking this.

Tears were shed. More than I'd like to admit.

That felt really in character. I hope it's not all gonna be so heartfelt, not that there's anything wrong with feels, but I'm looking forward to seeing wildly different experiences.

I imagine Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash's stories are going to be something more carnal, Rarity could go either way a bit of both perhaps, Fluttershy's will be modest and romantic I assume, and I'm not sure about Twilight, but I'm thinking the premise is gonna be "experimenting".

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My money's on FlutterMac. This could be equally as funny.
Also has less friendship destroying potential.

"We need more sexy stories!"

Pinkie Pie loves clopfics too.

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Glad you liked it! And yes, don't worry, there will definitely be a variety of relationship types....for better or worse.

somepony they know already? oh my...

785801 Now I've got a dumb smile from seeing yours.

Truly, this chap is amazing. BRB reading next one now as greedy a bastard as I am.

And I find myself back here.
Whatever. Better read it.

“I think you broke Fluttershy,” Rainbow Dash snickered. (Best line ever)
While AJ is not high on my 'best pony' list, this entry certainly makes her more appealing and her courtship with that colt seems believable. Bravo sir.

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If I only had a nickel for every time I've heard that...

...wait... I'd only have one nickel then...

If I only had a million dollars for every time I've heard that...

This was a great chapter but...the way you write Applejack's accent is kind of...insulting. I dunno, it pisses me off when they 'write' her accent like 'Ah' and 'thang'
If you ask me, you can write normally, and have the readers read it in her accent. Just my personal opinion though and I mean no disrespect. It's a touching story.

>The shock was only able to remain for a couple moments
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>Ah aughta buck you upside the head!
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>She groaned and tries to push herself deeper
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"As he pulled her closer, his strength only because more obvious."

Shouldn't this be 'became' more obvious?
Great story, will read moar!

"Interested in a little tail t'night?"
Elona, Player Character.

You know what is funny, in my home language, Afrikaans, Potato is 'Aartapple', which, directly translated, means 'Earth Apple.' That just makes this story that much more epic!

bwaahhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa daaaammmm good clop fic and lmfao pinky is such a pervert

Not really into clopfics but...not bad.

That was a sweet first encounter! Never made me jealous of a mare before until now...