Fluttershy finds Flowey down in the Underground. Cuteness ensues. Fluttershy learns that this flower isn't what he says he is. It's from Fluttershy's point of view.
Cover art by Alyssa Hartwick
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I hope this is an improvement over my first fic.
I see the Psyche-Locks!
FLOWEY!!!!
7238504 Yay! Or nay. I can't tell.
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Yay
7238525 I was wondering if someone can do a fanfic read of my fanfic?
7238525 What do you think of the story so far?
At the end of the fanfic I was going for Miles Edgeworth Investigations truth music wise.
Or this:
i'm not one to judge other people's work, but. i wouldn't say it was much of an adventure since it was so short. a slice of life, maybe, but probably not an adventure. also, a major character flaw with fluttershy, when she met flowey, she should've been either spooked, or incredibly shy. again, not judging, just voicing an opinion.
This could use some work. Like has been mentioned, it's quite short, and not much happens in it. I would suggest you read a longer story (50k+) that somebody else wrote and see how they write, and see what they do to add so much into a story that could be summarized in a few paragraphs. Because honestly, any story can be shortened to a few paragraphs, but a true storyteller can make a story that should be a few paragraphs into a massive epic. It's all in how you tell it.
Good luck!
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It's a adorable! But, I'm sorry, I can't do a reading: I don't have a YouTube account or anything like that
7239385 Well is there any way I can improve it?
7240655 I would add more scenes with character development, maybe have like at least a week of day-to-day life at the cottage with Fluttershy and Flowey before Flowey goes evil, and a scene where Fluttershy establishes the sleepover with her friends, so it doesn't look like they're just dropping in to save her from the Plot Gods.
7240920 I added the changes to the story. I hope you like it. It's in the second chapter.
7259325 I do like them! They definitely improve the story. It could still use some work, but nice job with the changes.
7274922 Thanks! :)
I will like it if you make a sequel with asriel
Here is my fanfic read for my own fanfiction. Thanks to SAO_Jaden for voicing Flowey in my fanfiction.
7280448 Maybe. If you haven't seen my fanfic read, in the end of the fanfic read, Flowey swears revenge on Fluttershy and it leaves in a cliffhanger.
This is actually really OOC.
Flowey acts nice.
7367296 I know that. For the first half, he acts really nice. But, that's only a faćade.
Meh, I was expecting the typical Friendless Pellets...
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Its most like a deception to get more souls...
...and then become goat child and immediately regret his decision.
I could see right through his facade, snoring to know how she slept so he could kill her and her friends in the night.