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KidatHeart5


I'm a writer, artist, and animation buff. I'm hoping to make my mark in the world by doing what I love most. My favorite characters are Discord, Luna, and Twilight Sparkle.

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Based on both the original animated film and the 2016 remake. Pipsqueak has lived in the jungle for most of his life, but when Tirek threatens to destroy him, Princess Luna must take the young colt to Ponyville. But will Pip want to leave the jungle or protect his home from the centaur?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Oh, I loved the remake! It's awesome that you're ponifying it!:scootangel:

Off to a great start. Glad to see bits of both movies sprinkled in to make something original.

The 1967 film is one of my all time favourites and the remake was just as great.

Hope this turns out great as well.

Wonderful job on the first chapter, I like how you didn't copy and paste the original movie and had the characters acting like they did in the show. I also really like the reason for non-ponies don't trust ponies.

I'm gonna take a wild guess and say Discord is in the role of Baloo or Kaa.

Hello there. I have to say this DOES look like it has the potential to be a darn good story. As NobodieZ said, I particularly like how you don't just copy-and-paste the movie and you keep the characters in character. Also, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'm going to go out on a limb and guess that Chrysalis is going to be either Kaa or Louie, but I am not going to wager any other guesses. Still I am going to be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Discord is King Louie, right?

While everyone here seems to hoping that you follow the two Disney examples of The Jungle Book, I think being more faithful to Kipling's original story or the animated short directed by Chuck Jones would be better calls.

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