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21latenighter


she could change the future, all she had to do was give up her past, and all of her friends, could she do it....

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No, just..no. Pinkamena is one of the worst tropes of the fandom and sequels to Cupcakes tend to be unoriginal making these types of stories a non starter. Your version doesn't do anything to expand on the character or the universe making this story bland at best.

It could use some work, but I am working on a Grim-Dark called A Dash of Insanity and it's going to be the first I've written about my favorite pony, however, every pony must face their dark side.

If you work with me, I can help you improve the overall Grim tone to your Dark fics.

I am honored by your request, however I don't think that dark fics are my genre, I think that I will stick to my usual topics of sad fics, I thought that I would try a dark fic to see how I liked it, and it just didn't click for me like the other stories did, so I have to decline, but thank you for the request

7215050 I am sorry you feel that way, I was trying a new genre, but it looks like I am not very good at it, so I will leave dark fics alone.

7215798 if you want to write a drak fic go ahead, but you and everyone else should leave çupcakes alone.

7215951 it is not that, the feeling was not there when I wrote this story like when I wrote the others, that is why I said I would leave them alone, sorry for making you think that it was because the story was based off of cupcakes. I am writing in different genres to see where I am most comfortable at, this was just the dark fic I chose to write, that's all :twilightsheepish:

to everyone that hates this story I loved it pinkamena got what she deserved I loved don't give up on dark fics trust me its good

7215050 Hello I understand but your a bit unfair here this was 21latenighters 1st grimdark and honestly it wasn't that bad and saying everyone should leave cupcakes alone it unfair also I could say the same thing for rainbow factory

7288216 Yes! People should leave rainbow factory alone, and my little dashie, all cliches that unless your going to subvert the premise are best left alone by authors. Also why are you replying to a month old comment?

7288721 well simply put I thought the story was good I enjoyed it that might just be me but I do see where your coming from and as far as my comment goes and the timing just discovered this story even have done a reading of it on youtube I thought you was being unfair was all

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