Twilight had forgotten the years that had past, because without her friends, she didn't have a life to live in them. Try not to cry as you read it.
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she could change the future, all she had to do was give up her past, and all of her friends, could she do it....
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There is a story I read once that Twilight learns of her immortality and how she would outlive her friends. She sat all night and got all angsty and Celestia came and talked to her about how great the future would be. That night she killed herself. Refused eternity to be with her friends.
This story reminded me of that one. Good job.
Thank you, I didn't know how it would go, I literally was sitting at work when the idea, so half of my shift I was writing in my notebook while I was working!
7204644 Where can I read that story?
Why doesn't this story have a tragedy tag?
I didn't think about that when I was going over it Starlight Nova, thank you for catching it
It was one of the first storys I read on Fimfiction. Sadly I didn't save it.
This is good, but I did not cry, for the mere reason that there is a plothole. If Twilight could just become mortal again at any given time, why didn't she ask Celestia sooner? Surely Twilight, one of the smartest ponies in the whole land, would know that. But, that is a mere nitpick, and other than that, this story is pretty heart-tugging. I didn't cry, but I felt something. So, all in all, I'd give this story a 4/5
thank you for your honesty, and as for your question, you bring up a very good point. there haven't been very many people who have don anything other than like or dislike. I can't make my stories any better with my own knowledge alone, so I welcome advice and questions like yours. thank you flamerush101
I think stories like this have become something of a guilty pleasure of mine. I literally say to myself, "I think I'll read something sad today."