Changelings are known to be heartless and suck the love from ponies. But not all changelings are like this and I can prove it. My name is David, and this is a story of how I found something that I thought was just a bug.
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Some of the sentences might need to be revised, as a better word could be put in their place. Such as,
could be replaced with 'tightly woven branches', or something else. Also, the first paragraph could be revised. Otherwise, decent story
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Thanks for letting me know!
You definitely need a proofreader. However, you do have my interest.
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Thanks for the feed back.
Yes, I know I need a proofreader. As I said , this is by frist story. Ever. So I'm not the best at writing.
But I'm glad I have your attention.
Not great, but I read worse. Still gut my attention. Interesting where and how it will goes . Sorry if my English suck.
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Its fine, I don't expect it to great, i'm not the best with grammar.
You don't have anything to be sorry for.
This looks good, interesting
Please continue
I'll give you 8/10 moustache
And a like nice work still can you make it like 1 chapter every week though?
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Thanks for the mustaches! Glad to see you like the story. As for updates, I will try my best to post a chapter a week, but a can't make any promises.
Keep up the moustache!
Well it's a little(short ) candy, but thank you for new chapter anyway. It been so long time ago, that I started worry.
You remember about us. (Readers)
Impossible they knew where the shot came from. It showed one *BANG* and when you fire, the sound echoes and bunces off things. Say I'm a quarter mile to your right, I fire, and when you hear the sound, it bounces back of things such as trees, making it sound like it came from the other direction as well, so there is no possible way they could have depicted where the shot came from :p
7685162 This is fanfiction... I do what I want
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Lots of crap has been happening scine it's Nightmare Night.
Plus I have two othere stories in the making, one of which will probably be posted in the next week or so if it is approved.
Dont worry. I wont forget you guys!
Wow, I really am liking your fic so far! I look forward to seeing more.
7685364 Glad to see you're enjoy the fic.
7685162 Dude i've found many hunters on my land just from them fireing once. You call tell where a shot comes from if you have sense.
7687482 Probably takes some time to develope that xD I went hunting once and the first shot i heard i got scared lol
Wow never thought Thorax will be in this chapter still been waiting for 2 weeks now, can you make it more faster? i'm just saying not forcing you.... or maybe i should use the TARDIS to go to the future to read more newer chapter. Well i'll just wait. Good Luck
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Sorry about the delay, as I said the the authors note I'll try to make the next chapter longer.
Take your time and make it good "we" can wait
7721916 Yes we'll wait.
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Thorax was definitely unexpected. I like when an author can do that well. Keep these coming, I really want to see where this is heading
This is interesting
interesting no comments
Well I like it so far, my only problem is there needs to be slightly more detail, not much more, but some parts feel a little rushed
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Thank you very much for the feedback! I'll keep that in mind while writing the next chapter.
I did rush a bit while writing "The Invasion" toward the end. I just wanted to have the chapter out.
MOAR!!!!
plz
Save da bug
The end part is in italics.... i think you need to fix that
David plz save Thorax
Take him with you.
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Thank you for pointing it out!
7685162 Think of sound as a pebble dropped into a pond. The ripples are sound. Now imagine that the ripples never stopped going outward until they eventually ceased to exist, or shrunk so small they couldn't be seen. That is sound. it does not bounce or ricochet. It is the spread of vibration until non-existence. You could easily determine the location of a gunshot with some practice once you're used to it, because you're going to be only hit by the sound on one end. Otherwise hearing would never be a reliable sense, and you would be able to hear foot steps at your rear, in front of you as well as on all sides of you.
Take him with you. It what I always peek when I play the TellTale games. Because it more 'fun ' way.
Try and go sneak-mode.
try to sneak past
Sneak past
Minor typo
Solid Snake that garbage
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Thank you for pointing that out
it think you mean Gotchya
you cloned we there
Throw the changeling at him
Let me see chance be caught by guards with possible mercy. Or run to the forest where you are meal. Yeah, enough stupid decisions for now.
Try sneak past.
Sneak past Them. Dude need to get home.
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sneak past!!
great chapter man :)
Sneak past plox
Roll a stealth check!
Sneak!