Start with a mess of words and ideas for a story then clarify so it makes sense.
According to legend, Ponyville used to be a small town where the elements of harmony resided, it was a peaceful place full of friendship, love and acceptance until one day the town went quiet. As if everypony had just packed up and hit the hills in one night. You decide that it's not that scary and take a train to Ponyville's only station.
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That is one of the oddest starts for a story I have seen. will be waiting for more. up vote not counting yet but there.
You might want to add a second person tag to your fic.
Wow, this was quite nice. An enjoyable read from start to finish.
However, each chapter felt a bit short. Now I'm not saying it's bad or anything, it's just short in my opinion. I hope that you continue this in some way.
P.S: I like what you did at the final chapter. Thats is one hell of a fourth wall breaking there
7830138 Thank you! And yes it is short, mostly because of my skills in writing at the time I wrote it was limited. Your comment brought my attention back to this story, which I'm going to rewrite, and (if possible) extend.
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Looking forward for that continuation!