• Member Since 11th May, 2012
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Unti future judment of the story, I will remain neutral but great job on this spin off

aside from a few misspellings greatly written! im excited to see what happens next, i like the spike applebloom romance, something i haven't seen before. will the next chapter be out soon?:rainbowkiss:

I really really recommend you separate paragraphs to make it more see able. it just looks like 1 big paragraph and thats not fun to look at :fluttercry:
So please do that if you can for now and with later chapters :twilightsmile:

Do you not know how to use the shift key at all, or how to use a proper format? Reading this is a chore.

756571
im doing that right now i cant believe i made that mistake and some others XD

756565
yes hopefully and yeah sorry i didn't notice it until now XD

756878
yes yes yes i'm not used to writing yet so i AM fixing it now hopefully with less.....crap? XD

759472 Dont worry i did the same thing a while back soo i feel ya :twilightsmile:

779365
When is later? When will the next chapter be out?:derpyderp1:
I just can't wait for it to appear.:pinkiecrazy:
*chewing on own tail*
I need an updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!!!!!:raritycry:

Bronydragon:moustache:

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soon i AM working on like 5 other stories for this site! X3

I'm wondering how Spike and Applebloom became :heart::heart::heart::heart: that.

Are we going to see what the crusaders are doing next?

So far they've only appeared in flashbacks.

2591590
give it time, just setting it for context and then its there turn :3

2887677
thanks i am working on the next part so no worries!

2897659 you managed to make
Me sad here.
Congrats.

Weren't the Crusaders being blackmailed to write down embarrassing gossips by Diamond Tiara?

Just came back to this story. It could benefit from some grammar and structural edits, but I still like the direction it was heading.

Do you still have plans for this?

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