Unti future judment of the story, I will remain neutral but great job on this spin off

aside from a few misspellings greatly written! im excited to see what happens next, i like the spike applebloom romance, something i haven't seen before. will the next chapter be out soon?

I really really recommend you separate paragraphs to make it more see able. it just looks like 1 big paragraph and thats not fun to look at
So please do that if you can for now and with later chapters

Do you not know how to use the shift key at all, or how to use a proper format? Reading this is a chore.

Interesting. Please continue.

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im doing that right now i cant believe i made that mistake and some others XD

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yes hopefully and yeah sorry i didn't notice it until now XD

756878
yes yes yes i'm not used to writing yet so i AM fixing it now hopefully with less.....crap? XD

756206
thanks hopefully it wont be so bad next time XD

nOT bAD. aM i lIKE GLaDOS?

759472 Dont worry i did the same thing a while back soo i feel ya

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Diamond Tiara. what about her?

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well id tell you but then
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trust me i'm taking this into a different direction with her.

Making out in the barn?

779351
yes that will be explained later X3

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779365
When is later? When will the next chapter be out?
I just can't wait for it to appear.
*chewing on own tail*
I need an updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!!!!!

Bronydragon

you put union instead of unison

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soon i AM working on like 5 other stories for this site! X3

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Faint

Bronydragon

Weren't the Crusaders being blackmailed to write down embarrassing gossips by Diamond Tiara?