Broken

I don't know what happened. I don't know why. But I see it. I see it again and again. The sounds are calling me. No. They tell me to run. Sounds are everywhere and I do not know.

So confused, but it's okay. That's what I am told. I am naughty because I don't listen, and it's not okay. I see it's not okay. Nothing is okay. That's what I am told.

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Coy1010

Coy1010 #1 · Apr 16th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Love the way the story is told. It's short thoughts that you can interpret easily but when put together makes a shocking scene. To me its like looking into a stained glass window where it fragments the story into thoughts that your brain puts together with imagination that makes a beautiful masterpiece.

SwordTune

SwordTune #2 · Apr 16th, 2016 · 1 · ·

7130731 Thanks!

DAMN HAMSTER

DAMN HAMSTER #3 · Apr 16th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Somebody call the wambulance!

Minds Eye

Minds Eye #4 · Nov 19th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Your review is ready at the PCaRG.

Mysterious Wind

Mysterious Wind #5 · Oct 4th, 2018 · 2 · ·

Damn.

EverfreePony

EverfreePony #6 · Jan 3rd, 2019 · 2 · ·

Wow, to see such a scene described via the playful mind of a young, innocent child... never seen this done before, but it surely is strong in its impact.

Betsuni