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Hmm Shady... not bad. Wait Sombra is involved too! Oh
This just got real
I like it , but I gotta say it , that felt short and rushed... sorry just being honest , I'd rather if you took more time to write and gave something a wee bit longer , I don't mind the wait. That said I'm stoked to find out what happens next.
7156205 I have to agree, it felt a little rushed and the pacing felt a little off. A bit faster than it should be. You need to take your time, hell you manage to follow t a whole week in one short, 900+word chapter, slow down. There is no reason to rush wright at your own pace
7156326 This chapter was rushed. Honestly I thought I was taking too long to write this and felt like I would receive soooo much hate from people. Guess I need to re-watch Lesson Zero...
Good , scary , bordering on discuringly descriptive.... I need more
Two things. 1. The pacing is much better than the last chapter, and feels a lot smoother doring scene changes.
2. Love this song
7372256 Thank you very much! I love that song too. When I heard it I imagined Sombra lounging on a throne and that made me put it. I'll try to find one for Vinyl next chapter.
Holy crap Vinyl actually said something and Tirek made/let her kill Shady! and dame that was dark and unexpected of her
7422127 Yeah, I wanted it to be unexpected. It showed how much Shady changed her during what happened. Also, Tirek let her kill him because he enjoys watching people get revenge. I felt like that trait fit Tirek and it would make a hellova plot point.
7422340 I like it
7423312 Thanks!
Welp this is the end it was fun and to think, this was my idea to continue this
I'm sorry it's just my ideas are usually don't come out goodand they usually backfire and... mep
7428385 Really, I thought it was a great idea! Again, I want to thank you for the idea it was fun to write (even though I took forever) and it wasn't difficult. You shouldn't sell yourself short.
7428396 thanks
7428405 Your welcome.
Dude I was rereading WHY I'M LOUD and realize a problem with Vinyl talking at the end
a slight edit to that part and the whole problem is fixed
7428504 Thanks for pointing that out! To EDITING! (rushes off)
7428504 Fixed it. Now it says that Vinyl COULD be mute for the rest of her life. Thank you so much. I had a mini heart attack for a second.
Something tells me this 'Shady' should do the hit first, then go for revenge.
Woooow. If Vinyl lives through this, she is going to be in therapy for life. More than likely, her heart, mind, body, and soul will be broken.
For some reason, I really want this to blow up in Sombra's face somehow.
PLEEEEEEEASE don't have Vinyl get some BS charge for killing that bastard!!
Well, at least Vinyl didn't get in trouble with the law for killing that scumball. I wonder what the cops had to say after Vinyl was found?