It seems to be an ordinary day for Twilight Sparkle, but to her something's amiss. After witnessing the harsh death which came to Pinkie Pie, it's up to Twilight to save herself and her assistant Spike and escape this nightmare before it's too late!
Featuring: Twilight Sparkle, Spike the Dragon, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy.
Mentions: Princess Luna, Princess Celestia.
(P.S. This was my first real fan fiction.)
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I enjoyed this. Nice job.
7114319 Thank you!
Whoa, spooky. Rarity's part reminded me of Coraline, with the stitches and stuff.
Nice job!
7114820 Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
Nice, i liked the story allot, but i reckon in your next fanfic try and make it a bit longer please, you have some talent with this sort of thing. try making a longer story, i wanna see how it turns out :)
and mares were telling their kids about the birds and the bees.
Ironic.
Good job! If your story gets added to any "bad story" groups, just make it so they aren't visible there.
Only problem I have with this is the chapters being less than 1000 words. Though that is just a personal preference.
7115132 Thanks!
7115404 How so?
7124071 Remember, everyone was gone except for the mane six and Spike. That means Zecora was missing.
7124094 I know that. But I didn't really see how it's ironic.
7124124 Oh... Hmmm... When I was writing this I knew it was irony but for some reason I didn't think it was XD (I'm stupid)
7124130 Okay? I just delete comments when I don't feel like arguing or responding to them.
7124155 The first few comments that I deleted weren't constructive criticism, they were just criticism.
Regardless, I apologize.
7126760 We cool bro? :3
7126974
Wait. How was she eaten by butterflies? They don't have a jaw, so they can't bite. Besides, they can only handle liquid in their stomachs?
The young dragon handed his master a handkerchief
PLEASE CHANGE MASTER TO TWILIGHT!!! IT MAKES HIM SEEM LIKE A SLAVE!!!!!!!
“Wait up!” Spike called, running to his master.
AGAIN, PLEASE CHANGE!
Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy were not corrupted.
What about Apple Jack and Rarity?
I'm confused now. Did she dream? Spike didn't know about it, so she must have. But the butterfly with blood on its wings? WHAT IS GOING ON?!
these chapters as so short you can just combine them into a short one shot.