Written for a writing contest in the Writer's Group, based on this picture
Adagio Dazzle regrets her life as she lays dying on the stage after the Rainbooms destroy her crystal.
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7107581 Yeah. It's funny, I write dark by nature, but this story actually hurt to write.
7107636 Your work paid off. I felt a lot of sympathy going towards Adagio, kudos for that.
Damn.
Unimaginable death would have been so good as an ending....
Well, you're the author. So can't argue with you there.
well done. have a like.
7109059 Thank you kindly.
7109552 you're welcome my friend
Interesting idea and possibly the most dramatic conclusion for Rainbow Rocks imaginable: That the Dazzlings' defeat would have cost them their lives if their enemies had not reached out to them and used the power that had defeated them to also heal them.
Now... Where to go from here?
So she's still alive then?
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7110496 More or less.
7110676 Yeah probably not "fully" alive, not going to go with the Zombie Theory though.
Which one is Glasses? Rarity? Were Glasses part of her stage-costume? Can't remember, but it seems like something she would do. I'd've guessed Human Twilight, but you know, wrong movie.
Also really vague ending. Also-also, it would have been nice to get a reaction from the HuMane6 in this to how they would think they killed the sirens at first. Also-also-also, the other sirens would have had interesting perspectives to see.
Feels all around too short. It's possible to make a great story in a thousand words, but this is not one of those cases. I'd say this would need another two-thousand words to feel complete, and that's if you were very concise.
7112232 Yes, I originally meant Glasses to be Twilight. The story wasn't meant to be from anyone else's perspective, being based around that lone image of Adagio.
This feels... Incomplete.
7128544 u know. I'll get the next part up if I ever get it finished.
it would be nice to have acouple of chapters at sweet apple acres.great story, well done!
7129028 Alrighty.
Hm... Well. This chapter was okay I guess. A note: Change your story tag to incomplete. This not not by any means completed.
7133770 True, but I may not ever put another chapter on it. So, I marked it Complete, because 'Finished' isn't an option.
I changed it to Incomplete, but it'll probably stay that way for a long time.
7135663 Then you could always use Hiatus I suppose. That means, "On a break", so not exact. Cancelled would also imply what I think you're saying I suppose.