This story is a sequel to Champion of Equestria
Mark Less Stevens is a hero in Equestria. Half a year ago, he saved Canterlot, as well as Equestria, from Sombra. Who plotted to return by possessing his body, using the very crystal that sent him to Equestria. He didn't succeed, but the conflict now left Mark looking more like Sombra. Now a unicorn, Mark tries to move on with his life as he does his duties as a protector of Equestria.
But burning deep within Mark still, is some strange feelings he can't explain. Memories and thoughts not his own pleague him, causing him to question himself. As he tries to wrestle with this inside darkness, other forces plan to move onto the scene. Such as a curtain changeling Queen.
AUTHOR's NOTES: This is the Sequel to Champion of Equestria. Please read it first to understand everything.
On a side note: I decided to add the sex tag because there will be moments in this story that will deal with those moments. However, I'll try to keep it to a minimum so it doesn't become a clopfic.
Not a bad start, but I feel it still needs something. I know. It needs more cowbell!
I might take all of May off to think things though. Not pleased with my writing right now, and with the (so far) low views, I was starting to think about cancelling this before I got any deeper. Keep in mind, it's been two years since I wrote the first story, and I'm feeling really rusty on my writing skills. But I read a story that renewed the spark in my heart to continue, (seriously, read Mlp: The story retold, by Wolven5. It's GREAT!) and I'm going to push on ahead.
I may twiken some things and rewrite parts of the past few chapters to make them more fun and suck less. Then, if I'm not writing new chapters to this story, I may begin work on a new project. More on that soon. To all the readers that favorited or read this story, thank you for the support, and I hope I can make the best sequel story I can to entertain you.
There is a great temptation if someone introduced some Princess Luna grade Moonshine to them.
Hah! The most collective people says the same thing in their head.
Well well well look whose here! EhemYou probably don't know meehem. Yes I'm here to write a comment for the last 2 stories that you wrote. The last story was awsum and my words can't describe them, but the other fans of The Champion Of Equestria already did that. While we are at it, I can't believe that this story has so few views/likes. The other one currently has 370 likes, somewhere there. This one has 12 likes... Huh, what do you mean it's 13? Oh yea, I liked it. My subconsciousness told me that there's 13 likes. I know that people forgot about your story, but seeing as you ask questions and no-one answers them. It looks like as if you talk to yourself
What does even get you motivated to write new chapters. Anyways, I will try to upload this story to some group so it should get more views/comments/likes. If you read this, that means ur awsum and Peace!
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First of all, THANK you for the complement you gave. It's nice to see someone notice this story. As for why readers forgot about me is caused I wasn't on here for almost two years, so I can't really blame them. See, my father died near the end of the first story, zapping any mojo I had to continue. Then, while I was away from this site, I was dealing with loss and my crazy oldest sister. To sum up a bad story, her and her 'boyfriend' swooped in like vultures after playing the caring card and stole from us. Mostly all my dead dad's things.
So yeah, I had a reason to be away for awhile.
But, I came back here. Mostly to keep from going insane. And when starting this story, I had it to where Mark was away for awhile dealing with things too, as a way to work things out. Plus explain why I hadn't continued. But yeah, I was (and stillam) afraid everyone will pass this up because of the gap of time. Just like other good stories on here.
You asked what keeps me going.... The drive to write. To create a story, look back and go 'yeah, I made that.' And hope others enjoy your work as well.
Thank you very much, and sorry I rambled on here.
7261922 I'm sorry, I really am. I understand the feeling when someone dies and takes all their treasure. My father died when I was 10, he didn't have any money, only loans that my mother had to pay for him. Last year my grandfather died and his 'good wife' took all his belongings, a house, money, farm, everything. She didn't share with my uncle, nor me and my sister, just took it all to herself. My uncle is really sad because of that, he knew from the beggining that she would take it, but he didn't do anything. So yea I understand your feeling, and sorry that I rambled too
Hey guys, just leaving a small message on here. I'm taking a break on here to focus on drawing a comic with my cousin, so it may be awhile till I pick back up on this. Truth is, ever since I was a kid I drawed my own comics, now I may get a chance to publish my work for everyone to read. It's kinda cool.
Let's just hope we can work past getting the issue published as well as copyrighting our work so we don't get ripped off, or sued by anyone.
Excited to see what happens.
Dead. Fucking Luna's teats!! I wanted to read another great one!
hay continue it