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An absurd individual who like ponies.

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It was Derpy's idea. Blame her. Her stupid dare to ask out Octavia.

And Octavia said yes.

Now Lyra has one choice, cut off the relationship (and risk disappointing her friends), or just roll with it. Either way, Lyra knows she's going to be in a pickle.

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I likes it wish there was more in depth story. A non one shot story of this would suffice but from my standards it was pretty good. although I didn't like your portrail of Octavia.

Hm, not bad. It was fast paced, even for a oneshot, but still a decent story. Have a like!

7129317 Thanks for the tip! A non one shot version of this story could possibly be interesting As for my portrait of Octavia..yeah, I've almost always had trouble with prim and proper characters. Although, that doesn't really excuse it at all, and I don't want it to. Either way, thanks for the critique!

Lyra and octavia is a weird ship... But eh i enjoyed it :3

7152609 I'm glad you enjoyed this! The weirdness factor is the main reason I actually wanted to write this.

I kind of wish the ending was a bit longer, so we could see the reactions of the others to the "break up", but that's really my only complaint, which is really more of a nitpick.

7267966 Thanks for sharing your opinion and adding it to your favorites!

7268020 You're welcome

Octavia levitated a book out of Lyra's bag. "Legends About Humans. Seem interesting. Classy."

What! Octavia is a unicorn?

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