Let me introduce myself. My name is Wrex, I was the lead mechanic of cabin 9. It's a weird name I know, but when you breed the god of blacksmiths with a truck mechanic, you get named after garage lifts. Anyways, It had been nearly two months since I entered the Labyrinth and, ended up in the outskirts of the Everfree forest, and aside from the few sightings from the town's foals, I've been able to get into Ponyville, take care of a pest, and get out safely. Why defend the small town from the beasts you ask? Why not Take off and, try to find my way back to camp? Well...It's kinda my fault their here.
our first fanfic! it would help to be familiar to the percy jackson universe to read this fanfic thanks, pic comes from rickriordan.com
potential. Try yo describe more like how and what goes on. Not take minimum, take the whole picture. That's all
You know, I don't think I've ever seen this particular crossover before.
I know I'm going to sound like a jerk, but I'm not interested in reading a story if you can't even get the grammar in your summery close to correct. Find a pre-reader to help you, and then I might be interested. Sorry for sounding like a jerk, but I'm just trying to help. You're going to turn off a LOT of people if you can't get your grammar right. (Especially on simple stuff like their, they're and there, and it's and its.)
Sorry to be 'that guy', but if someone has to be him, I may as well be. Good luck!
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Jerk? I appreciate the flaws being pointed out so I can make Improvements in the future. Thank you for being "that guy"
Wrex?
Shepard.
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I have a shotgun.
815110 maybe we'll talk later.
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Can't, I need to do some... calibrations.
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good or bad thing?
823679 I'll wait until I actually get around to reading the story to decide that.
Puppies. That is all.
dayum... this crossover shoulda been made earlier... cuz its fri'ckin awesome :D
This is good more
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Interesting enough. I hope to see what happens next soon.
You've definitely got my attention!