"The power of believing turn dreams into reality, and if you dream, you can be anything."
This story is a sequel to Celly's Day Off
Luna wants to do well with her role as Equestria's second princess, but she doesn't particularly give off a good impression... especially since she has been gone for a thousand years. Now she's handling wary citizens, paperwork, and of course, dreamwalking.
Entry for ocalhoun's Big 250K Contest
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Are you actually going to continue this? It feels like a complete story.
7162019 Well, actually, I am not actually sure if I should change the tag to complete yet. I am probably going to update and add some more details to the story as soon as the judging is done, but it would probably stay a one-shot.
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If it's a one-shot, then it's complete. :B Adding details later, you can just post a blog and feature the story so people can come back to it.
Well that was an interesting tidbit. It was interesting how you had multiple points of intercept, such as Periwinkle. And it was nice seeing Luna's perspective on these things. That said, it felt like some parts (such as the dreamwalking) were pretty superfluous to the rest of the story, and other parts felt slightly rushed. And it felt like the story was trying to have deeper meaning, stretching toward that with Luna's being rejected and feared by her subjects ... but that doesn't quite come to a payoff later that would enable it to be a real theme of the piece.
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