• Member Since 18th Oct, 2014
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KiraOnlinePony


Just an author looking to overcome writers block

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After learning that Curseword has been hospitalized, Jackpot and the mane 6 band together to make her life after the hospital a little easier!

For those not in the know https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At8r13ZIgpc

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Comments ( 7 )

I love Lost, but this' as choppy as the waves behind a speed boat.

This is a good story, but it would`ve been nice to have read Curseword`s response to all their help. Overall a good story.

7081774 Yeah, I know, But this story came up last minute. This was kind of a clusterbomb irl in writing.

7081853 Ah, but see Curseword is The Lost Narrator's OC. I felt bad enough writing for Mag so I was hoping that Lost sees this, ya know.

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I'm not saying I dislike the story, it just doesn't flow well enough for me.

I have little doubt others will love this to the feature box, but it didn't tickle my lobes.

Ok yeah that makes sense thanks. :pinkiehappy:

That! That was brilliant! I absolutely loved it! keep writing! :pinkiehappy:

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