I entered the fandom during season 2, and never looked back. I write as a hobby and enjoy nothing more than to please the readers.
Ponies wear horseshoes. Horseshoes are made of iron and steel. Pinkie Pie gets a super magnet stuck on her hoof, and she cant get it off. What starts out as a fun accident turns quickly hazardous as Pinkie goes through Ponyville to get help before the magnet gets better of her.
This is a game of Keep Away she's not going to have fun with.
Page generated in 0.164 seconds
Total duration
1,106 users online
2,041,147 hits today, 1,872,792 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
If that magnet were any stronger, it would have scrambled our hard drives just from reading the story.
Its the magnetic Tar Baby.
I have a 3*3*2 inch horseshoe magnet, and my Uncle, who can lift a small car engine by hand, cant pull its keeper off directly. Over 200 pound of pull. For a 6 inch circular magnet, contact force should be over a thousand pounds.
Powerful magnets affect magic? Most certainly. Powerful magnets twist Light as much as decent sized black holes. Its how they use a laser to read magnetooptical drives. the magneic field causes the polarization of the laser to rotate and his changes its intensity when passing through a fixed polarizing filter.
The trick when the magnet took more time to appear reminds me of a very old scifi short story, about a new superconducting generator and an accident and an engineer rotated through four dimentions to become mirror image, includng all his protiens.
But where did he come from?!?
Where did he go?
Where did he come from?????
Magneto
Wait wait wait wait, hold up, one less walking limb means marginally shorter travel times? Well shoot, time to cut off both of my legs, if one less limb means faster transit, than two less must mean I get there almost instantaneously.
In all seriousness though, a good story, not a bad plot, I see starlight's getting some attention, that's nice. And they go back to normal like only ponyville does.
Overall, 8/10
Just some errors I saw:
I think you mean defiantly.
I am repelled by this story; yet, it sticks with me...
[After reading the story]
Something like that exists?
Now Spike should keep a certain distance to any unicorns and metal objects.
: "Except Rarity. She will be quite attached to me."
Good story!
But who sendPinkie this magnet in the first place?
(Gilda?)
One small hint:
When you change the scenes, you should add a seperator. Simply looks better. At least in my opinion.
7063390 Magnetars are awesome.
Do Not Get One Stuck to Your Hoof
They stretch atoms into long spindles. Magneto ain't nuthin' compared to these things!
I have a pair of small rare earth-ferrous magnets we got for free from a lab supply company. They're only about 1 inch by 1/2 inch by 1.4 inch... and take quite a huge amount of force to pull apart. I once tested their strength and each could hold a 20 pound iron weight with ease.
What this story is missing is classic cartoon escalation.
In the market, there should have been a convenient celebration of all things iron, steel, nickel, and cobalt. And when she manages to survive navigating the lanes lined with knives, swords, anvils, nails, screws, and battleships; she lastly stumbles into a special stall selling MRI machines and Tesla coils.
And Discord guffaws wildly as the sparks fly.