I live among the insane and the demented employees of this Rainbow Factory, and I’m perfectly fine with that. Let me tell you of a particular day, and you’ll hopefully see why I’m happy here.
A story based on the famous fanon: Rainbow Factory by Aurora Dawn. That can be found here.
If you haven't read it before, then some of this may not make sense.
I hope you do continue with this story, as this is an interesting take on the whole RF/PD story that is already out there. I thought you presented a good opening chapter and your pacing is good. I wouldn't mind reading more than just the consequent two chapters you would added.
-Frost
Really likeing this story can't wait for more updates to come . Also let all the little ones burn
A pony with a pink moustache and carries a small box around. I immediately knew who this was and you deserve a cookie because that was a funny reference. Awaiting your next update.
Hm, this is interesting. I'll definitely be curious to see what you do if you ever release more chapters.
Dude, I felt sick reading this. It's good if a MLP Fanfic can make me sick. I've read some of the disturbing ones, but this one, it just... Unnerves me...
It's really good, but it just... Ugh...
The pony with a pink mustache and a small wooden box. Hmm... must be the blacksmith.