Pearls Of Wisdom

Join the Mane Six as they go on some of the wackiest adventures imaginable, and learn some interesting new morals along the way.

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Zum1UDontNo #1 · Sep 8th, 2016 · · · Potion Hunters ·

*Flips through checklist* Alright, let's see here... What do we have...
>Consistently good grammar [X]
>On-point humor [X]
...Hmm, so far...
>In-character characters [X]
>Original and intriguing plots (so far) [X]
...Hold on, this can't be...
>Well-played Pinkie [X]
>Smoothly incorporated exposition [X]
...Wait, how is it...
>Worldbuilding [X]
>Believable in-canon [X]
>Room for future additions [X]
...That was... Huh. I couldn't find a single thing to complain about. Odd. Normally I can nitpick about just about anything, but any flaws are either from personal preference or too small to justify complaining about. ...Well done.