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This story is a sequel to Hope Sinks
After a sick joke which involved reducing Scootaloo to tears, Anon is about to receive comeuppance for his actions. And, how!
Rated T for... Various reasons.
This story is a sequel to Hope Sinks, and is written with permission by anonpencil. So, there.
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7055487 Well the original author said himself if I was going to do a sequel I should be as vicious as possible,so I was. Simple as that.
7055538 That was the general idea. Mission completed.
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I can vouch, I did say this. :)
0/10 Extremely OOC, Anon did not have massive boner from his beatings.
7055555 Hello, genius. Thanks for vouching for my credibility. How does it feel, to be my temporary muse?
7055560 How do you know? The story cut out just as it was getting good. Just like real life.
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Terrifying.
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This is quite true, there are usually boners. But my anons also usually suffer constantly at the hands of ponies. So that much is pretty spot on at least.
7055570 Perhaps I'll add a boner- rific epilogue, if there's enough public demand.
Betcha can't wait now.
I still appreciate this story, and it was good. But, for a story inspired by Anonpencil? Not enough spike torture.
Anon should really try being kinder more orphan.
Nice story.
I'd stick around but I have to get to dinner with my parents.
Justice is served.
Scootaloo and the rest of Ponyville are probably just getting started.
Speaking of them, they'd probably invade Equestria just to get him, if Sombra wasn't blown up and Chrysalis was nearby.
Nice work.
Damn, you beat me to it.
But it remains to be seen first if reading this fic here satisfies my lust for terror and dipping Anon's head into a bath of acid. Probably not.
7056614 Well, you can always write your own. No one's stopping you. Let me know what you think. I look forward to hearing your legendary bluntness once more. It's been too long now...
I never felt so satisfied about the mysery of a person ever before in my life. Good job.
But I haven't gotten mine yet. 
But should it end here? I think Anon deserves more hell.
Scootaloo has gotten her revenge.
7056671 I look forward to part deux. Funny how people can bond over their mutual hatred of a character. It's quite the opposite to the ethos espoused by the show, but meh. Some people don't deserve a second chance...
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Celestia: Yes, Equestria is a society where we all strive for harmony and tolerance. Sometimes there are conflicts, but we forgive each other very quickly. There is only a place for love in mine and Princess Luna's kingdom.
Equestria Inquirer Reporter: But what is with Lord Tirek? It goes around that you banished him in Tartarus, your Highness. Twice.
Celestia: Oh, yes, Tirek. He was an enemy of the kingdom. It was crucial to imprison him.
Reporter: Was?
Celestia: I mean, he is, of course. (Looks like I ate a little bit too much cake before this interview.....)
Reporter: But what about King Sombra? He isn't anymore.
Celestia: King Sombra was killed by the Crystal Heart. It was not mine or Princess Luna's doing.
Reporter: So he got destroyed by a weapon of love?
Celestia: I really appreciate your interest in interviewing me and enjoyed our conversation. But I am a very busy princess and I have other things to tend to now. Farewell. *leaves*
Reporter: B-But you haven't answered my question yet, your highness!
Celestia (whispers to a guard): Make sure he doesn't ask anymore questions and observe the newspaper over the next few weeks. We can't afford to lose our image as a land of ultimate harmony and love.
7056749 "breaks 4th wall" everypony your princess's are lying look at this "shows comment" YOLO
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7056749 Well, in almost every good work of fiction, a utopian society is often exposed as the sham it is. 'Every Rose Has It's Thorns', after all.
I hope this concept will be brought up in Season 6, but something tells me it may be a little highbrow for the 'target audience'.
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Not really what I thought. Just a little, creative explanation that Equestria isn't such a peaceful and harmonic place like the fandom used to believe at the beginning.
I don't think that Celestia and Luna are hiding anything there and I'm sure the population knows about what they do with their enemies.
7056877 Shame, might add a few more layers to the show.
Don't get me wrong, it's good enough as it is, but it's occasionally nice to have something a bit different from the omnipresent friendship messages. The fight between Tirek and Twilight, and almost the entirety of the finale of season 5 are good examples of this. (Starlight Glimmer's pathetic backstory being an exception, but I've ranted about that elsewhere).
Still, only three more days to wait. Woo hoo.
I really enjoyed this. Prank you very much.
7058188 Thank you very much.
Fluttercheer and Flutterpriest favouriting this fic, and me having Fluttershy as an avatar...
My heart is a-flutter. Hurray!
Haha, very good read. Always love it when douchebags get slapped with the Karmic Justice bat repeatedly, just something about that makes it so....cathartic. Definitely hoping a sequel comes, either way, good story and all of my faves. 10/10.
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Oi the bloody show is out. And may I just say that this is not one of my favorite developments in mlp what with the demon spawn and all that.
Good story though but should have at least had his mommy take his savings not actually have the bank steal them all.
Woulda made for a fantastic taste of betrayal.
Headcanon: Rainbow Dash knew exactly where he would end up and had been plummeting from enormous heights the entire fic.
MONSTER CRUSHED BY FALLING PEGASUS! Fortunately, no one was harmed.
Dear Anon, I want to say that, I'm sorry for what happened. That's why I propose you to come living with my family, you'll be a prince, you'll do whatever you want and no one could never say s**t about you ever, If you managed to say this french word without a English accent : "hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobie"
PS : the french word is the longest French word ever.
PPS : you have ten minutes to do it Good luck (you'll need it)
Dear Readers of this comment, please understant that everything I say that compliment HIM was totaly false, also the french word is a scientific one : it's used to describe the fear of long words (irony, irony, what will we do without you)
PS : Here is the letter to HIM without the compliments : ***************** who dosen't deserve the name of Anon, Go s**k all the d***s of the Universe, get raped, two times, got every of your limbs brocken and maybe if you managed to earn my pity I will end your life. But now for what you did. . . YOU IN FOR THE WORST BAD TIME YOU'LL EVER HAVE :
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7056749
Meh...all you need to do is look at how the town of Ponyville treated Zecora, at least until she was able to do something for them. Or how Rainbow Dash said that all of the griffons were jerks based on the actions of one of them.
There's something to be said about disproportionate retribution...
7355595 i agree completely but on a completely unrelated note
I Lord Anarchy the Arrogant and Prideful shall speak in this size forever and ever and pineapple
that has to hurt
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Equestria Inquirer Reporter: But what is with Lord Tirek? It goes around that you banished him in Tartarus, your Highness. Twice.
Celestia: Oh, yes, Tirek. He was an enemy of the kingdom. It was crucial to imprison him.
Reporter: Was?
Celestia: I mean, he is, of course. (Looks like I ate a little bit too much cake before this interview.....)
M
Princess Luna: Actually, you'll find that its hard to be an enemy of anything when you're confined in hell. Or the Moon.
More please