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Oh I like this story. The Casablanca reference had me thinking it would go one way but it went another. Bravo for a good story. Just wish it didn't end so abruptly.
Wonderful story! Love how the story progressed with brilliant pacing though I do wish it was longer. At the end, I wished they made amends, though the way it did was delightful with Cordia shutting Dom down.
To sum my comment up: love the short story! Short yet filled with enough content at a good pacing with enjoyable characters made it a nice read before sleep.