• Member Since 10th May, 2012
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Matthew Penn


I write imaginary stories about cartoon horses.

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Cordia, Rarity's cousin from Manehattan, visits Ponyville for the weekend to clear her mind of her disastrous marriage to the stallion who left her for another mare, but the past is not very easy to escape when Cordia's ex-husband comes back for her.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 2 )

Oh I like this story. The Casablanca reference had me thinking it would go one way but it went another. Bravo for a good story. Just wish it didn't end so abruptly.

Wonderful story! Love how the story progressed with brilliant pacing though I do wish it was longer. At the end, I wished they made amends, though the way it did was delightful with Cordia shutting Dom down.

To sum my comment up: love the short story! Short yet filled with enough content at a good pacing with enjoyable characters made it a nice read before sleep.

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