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WHAT?! YOU WANT ACTION?!
*posts new chapter*
THERE'S YER ACTION, B^TCH!
...and stuff.
Oh, shit.
wait
aren't Rome and Greece human nations
from human history
you work fast
That, sir, is a brutal cliffhanger. I eagerly look forward to the next installment.
Mother of Celestia...
795573 Look what you did... now you've gone and suffocated me...
NNNOOOOOOO!!! YOU GOD DANG FILLIES! WHYYYY!!!!
Damn your fast
795613 Don't over think it. Approach this situation with Pinkie logic, which boils down to "When shit don't make sense, deal with it."
I've seen something like this happen in other fanfics, even in other fandoms, so I know not to think too deeply.
CMC, YOU ARE SO IN TROUBLE IF YOU LIVE!
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Applebloom! Noooooooo!!
No! I hate cliffhangers
*reads title*
aww shit. someone is gonna die
Karma and also:
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Hey! i was right
"Here lies Applebloom, she mighta been a klepto"
woah hold on! ... oke thats daring but asome all the same >.<
you'r going to spoil us rotten if you keep giving us so many updates in so little time ^^
And que dynamic spartan entrance.
If applebloom dies ima drop ma shit and walk out the door to never come back and i would only look back once to shake my head in a disapproving manner. Nice touch with the urine u kept it real.
795890Show me a historical document or scholarly source that says this?
Hehehe the Timberwolves are going to get their ass kicked by a Spartan HA'HOO HA'HOO HA'HOO
man you realy are fast wich is a good thing, what the buck will happen
795573 "What, you want action?"
*Aegis kills Applebloom*
*I slowly back away from Aegis*
With all the stupid shit the Crusaders get in, it makes me wonder why nobody ever writes fic where their dangerous stunts actually get them killed. And then it's a sadfic on how the other crusaders cope with the loss and guilt they feel.
NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO APPLEBLOOM!
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"spartans never used bows and arrows; believing them to be cowardly."
I wouldn't be so bold to say that. I’m pretty sure that Spartans as pro warriors didn't underestimate the combat advantage witch missile weapons give. If they personally used them in battle? Probably not, but it wasn't because they considered it cowardly but rather because of the tactic they used in combat. Only in games you can skip from welding a bow to having shield and spear in your hand in a second.
Furthermore each Spartan could have as many as 3 slaves with them for battle. They carried their warriors spare spears and followed behind the fighting, handing fresh spears forward and killing any injured enemy they found (while helping injured Spartans) other tended the wounded, and some did the cooking and repairing of the warriors clothing and armor. Some helots (slaves) were equipped as light troops, some would have bows, other javelins, some with slings, they would have had no armor, they would guard the sides of the Spartan infantry unit, they also stood in front of it and fired at the enemy units, when the enemy got close they would run away and hide behind the Spartans.
Spartans didn't use bows because they didn't had to in battle... I’m sure that if Spartan warrior culture would be thrown against flying enemy they would adjust tactic to fit the threat by equipping them self with bows so the fact that Spartan Stallions used bows in Equestria is in my humble opinion legit.
796115 Plutarch, The Life of Agesilaus.
Btw love the story.
Meh, Applebloom had it comin'. She was warned
Looking forward to the next one
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In a certain way, that's not exactly a complement...
...I'm sure Spartan Shield would last longer than any of you.
(Yes, you may kick me for that.)
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This story is amazing, you have my praise. Also, I don't know how you update so fast, but you've made my day multiple days in a row now! :D
Aegis Shield is best Night Guard.
Aegis Shield, who would win in a fight? Aegis Shield the Night Guard or Spartan Shield the lost warrior?
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In a FAIR fight, Spartan Shield would probably win. He travels armed and armored at all times. Its hard to get past a shield and spear and armor.
In a strategic fight, where one can use tactics of stealth or terrain, Aegis Shield would win. My Lunar Stallions have a tendency to hang upside down like bats, and get the drop on foes.
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SHOW ME THE CARFAX!
You son of a BITCH! How dare you leave me dangling from that cliff! Applebloom is at the bottom of this cliff being attacked by timberwoles and you LEFT ME HANGING AT THE TOP OF THE CLIFF! AAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
What... what have you done!
jk, but seriously, poor applebloom! it made me tear up!
In theory you didn't specify whose blood it was so in theory Spartan Shield could have attacked the wolves at the last second...hopefully
795613 So is France, yet it's clearly mentioned in the series.
Also, poor, poor timberwolves....
I think the CMC saying is: Cutie Mark Crusaders *insert mission here* YAY!!! Not yeah, but it's whatever.
>for the silvery masks they were always hid their faces
wat
795573 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Applebloom.png
797177 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png
798174 a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/e/tealcindeedplz.jpg
Ah-hah, here is the missing pegasus contingent of the Lunar corps in the flashback. It still sort of begs the question of what Celestia's aerial force was doing at the time, though I suppose that they could be holding back for a strategic strike on the Lunar force when they go airborne to attack the back of the phalanx and try to break it. Well, I'm sure that will play out in the next chapter or so. It's still a great background setting for telling us about Spartan's former life.
Now, as for things in current day Equestria... we have Apple Bloom and the Cutie Mark Crusaders indulging in breaking and entering, theft of private property (I suppose that if you consider Spartan's leg greaves as historical artifacts, it's even up into the grand theft range rather than petty theft for punishment purposes.), breaking restrictions on unescorted travel into the Everfree (well, maybe not on that one for Apple Bloom, since she did seem to have reasonably free rein over being allowed to visit Zecora, though it was obvious even in canon that she didn't do it often enough to fully remember the path there, even after navigating it successfully once by herself in the Poison Joke episode.) If those leg greaves are large enough for the CMC to use them as reasonably fitted back plate armor, Spartan's got even bigger muscles on his legs than I'd imagined. No wonder the girls were all treating him as a spectator sport. Anyway, I see that as usual, the Crusaders jumped in over their heads and are getting into more trouble than they can easily handle. That spear throw from Apple Bloom was pretty much to be expected for its effectiveness, but it doesn't speak well for their survival abilitie at the moment. You stuck in a nasty cliffhanger there, though I'm tolerably confident that some pony will step in to save the day. After all, you haven't hung a "Sad", or "Dark" tag on this one yet.
Frankly, after this stunt, I don't know whether Spartan will be admiring Apple Bloom for the attempt, or disgusted with her for it and the poor execution of planning and tactics on the CMC wilderness training run. (As I recall, theft was part of the training style, since it was an acceptable method of resupply when on campaign.) Still, it's not as if she and the others had proper supervision for it... I wonder if as punishment, the girls are going to be given to Spartan for a modified agoge course? Seems to me that if he's monitored to keep him from going overboard with training that doesn't serve any purpose any more, it could be a useful thing for him to occupy his time with, and be another way for him to get used to the new world he is in.
Still enjoying the spin you're putting on this, and the bits of historical information that you're slipping in as well. Definitely earning the "E" for educational content on this story, Aegis.
Requim im Pace, Applebloom.
Applebloom pie?
Fuck.
Timberwolves, you gon' die cuz' killin' Apple Bloom.
795613 Naw, those'r myths. Only country I know about is Amare-ica.
...
SAVE THEM, SPARTAN!!
i thought cliffhangers were supposed to happen at the tops of cliffs
love the reference to the immortals from 300. You know what I LOVE THE ENTIRE STORY FOR BEING A REFERENCE TO THE BEST HUMAN ARMY IN THE HISTORY OF THE WORLD.
No..NO!....NOOOOOOO!!!!!
APPLEBLOOM NOOO!
YOU S.O.B.!!!!