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{quickly snaps a photo of him} hehehe.
NOOOO DONT CONFORM SPARTAN NOBODY LIKES A CONFORMIST
i just can't stop myself from reading this story!
LOOK OUT CALL THE COPS WE GOT A STREAKER ON THE LOOSE
Oh, that's hilarious...
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And that's terrible... how could you do that...? It's almost as bad as killing kenny.
Young Obi-wan: "I have a bad feeling about this..."
Qui-gon: *Line I can't remember*
Young Obi-wan: "It's not about the mission master, it's something elsewhere...elusive..."
Meanwhile in Equestria Spartan Shield is up to something that can only in a backfire, and an explanation as to why Big Mac was injured during that one episode where Applejack did not want to ask for help.
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Thanks for the read, good sir/ma'am(?), and good night!
A battle for the ages theirs will be, no doubt.
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And things continue their down hill roll...
Or is it a fall off a sheer cliff at this point?
Either way I'm loving the story.
oh yes how embarassing, only most of all of Equestria wears no clothes, how emabarassing for him indeed!
Hmm...What does he have in mind?
...Boot camp?
This is a very fun story to read. However there are a few basic grammar mistakes. Not in this chapter but all of them. Just pointed it out in case you have farther plans with this story.
Example: "going it wasn’t as bed"
It is just simple spelling mistakes, other than that the flow is nice.
This story is so awesome.
Only thing I spotted: “I knew I could count on *thee, Big Mac.” accusative case = thee not thou. </pedant>
Totally can't wait to find out what the big plan is!
What kind of plan involves a painter, Big Mac, and Rainbow Dash....
What is the Spartan up to... And I'm a little worried about the bleeding solar magic... bleeding magic in any situation is never a good thing..
as much as I love spartans my love for the NLR pulls me away. I cannot bear read another story with the NLR put down as monsters
He was naked! Turning around back the way he came he RUSHED back to the spa to get his breast plate, wrappings and cape-scarf. How embarrassing!
Spartan Shield is naked. This is how the world ends.
I can`t wait for the next page. I can see it. Spartan and Mac naked and oild up like in the real greek time.
Love this story. I stay up late just to check for it before I go to sleep. 2:30am rolls around, time to check for the spartan stallion. And I know I'm being anal here but...
Spartan Shield the statue had been completely excavated, and by estimations weighed between seven and nine thousand pounds.
At first it was really hard to move the seven to nine ton pony statue, but once they got some momentum going it wasn’t as bed.
A tonne is two thousand pounds (2240 actually), so it would be 3.5 - 4.5 tonnes. You also put bed instead of bad
854298 One of my Ponysonas is gay.
...Realizations
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Probably worse... Boot camp spartan style.
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Lol i just saw that
IT'S SO FUNNY LOLOL
So the big burly Spartan and the laid back, muscular work horse... Wrestled. In the spa. All wet.
Ha, that's so HO-
*Studies the time period*
T- wait, did, most of the male ponies back then were gay?!
*The penny drops*
He's cheating on me with Big Mac!
*Thinks more*
Or, maybe, threesome in the- Wait, where did that come from?!
Dear Princess Celestia
NO MORE MIND CONTROL, PRINCESS, YOU PROMISED
Twilight Sparkle
854262 The Spartan hipster
His power granted by celestia is the ability to create bottomless pits behind his enemy. He then kicks them in with slow motion.
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A republic is a decision-making body of government in which regions have representatives in numbers based on their population-count. There's no government in the army being shown, haha. Just Nightmare Moon.
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Wasn't as bad
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*indignant*
Jeez, I must not be doing a very good job anymore if all my commenters want to talk about is spelling errors.
854366 Do I have any further plans for a My Little Pony fanfiction? Well, no. That'd be a no.
Yay, new chapter!
Nice work with the historical flashback, though I need to point out that you goofed on your weight measurements. If the statue weighs in between seven and nine thousand pounds, it's a three and a half to four and a half ton hunk of rock, not seven to nine tons, like it would be if you were weighing the thing in kilograms. Pretty sure that was just the usual goof that anyone who uses metric scale for everything gets when they have to deal with the crazy English system of weights. (And yes, I say this being an American and stuck with said system.) I like that the "real" Daring Do is only having to deal with the sort of concerns that any real archeologist would need to deal with, and nothing at all like the sort of strange situations that her later fictional counterpart steps into in every single expedition. I still think that she and True Facts are probably using her old expedition notes as fodder to write the fictionalized stories, so that foals and other readers actually learn something about ancient civilizations at the same time they're getting entertained by a cracking good adventure novel. I guess that the proof in my conjecture will come if Twilight or Spartan get a letter in the future asking for an interview for fact finding prior to a new novel project by the series author. (It's certainly not out of the bounds of possibility that Daring and/or True are still around after 12 years, and if one or both are the authors, I'm sure they keep tabs on any news articles that come up relating to her first major find. And frankly, the truth in this case would be stranger than just about any fictional account that could be written.)
Not really, you're already reading it, aren't you?
Augh! Pinkie, what are you doing here?
Well, I heard you typing about truth being stranger than fiction and involving Twilight and Spartan, so I just had to pop in and say something.
Oh. Thanks Pinkie. Think you could go back to popping out on Ariamaki when he's typing?
Okie-doki-Loki! Bye, Trufla!
Ok, where was I? Oh, yeah. Anyway, I see that Spartan's finally hit on a possible way to raise the bits he needs for his community service project. An exhibition match of Greek wrestling between Spartan and Big Macintosh is my guess as to what he's planning. It's certainly a sport that Spartans would have experience with, it can be easily performed as a spectator event for charity, and there probably aren't too many Ponyville residents who wouldn't pay bits to see Big Mac oiled up and flexing his muscles in a match. Oh, and I'm sure that Spartan would have his share of admirers as well. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png I would imagine that Spartan's going to consult with Rainbow Dash to find out what the average admission price is to an athletic event in modern times, as well as to see if things like the opening ceremony dedicating the matches to the Goddesses are still part of the normal series of events. The artist is obviously for advertising posters, though I imagine that souvenier photos are a possibility as well. (Hmmm, he doesn't really know about camera technology, either. I would imagine that he's going to get a crash course in that technology as well for this event.)
Now, as for Luna... ok, I'll grant that she has a right to be suspicious of Spartan, especially if she's sensing magic that should be her sister's coming from Spartan's body. That way, she and Celestia have an excuse to indulge and play peeping mare with Luna's magic. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png I see that Nobody's explained to Spartan about the nature of public flowerbeds, though I would imagine that with the sort of speed-growth techniques Earth ponies have for vegetatoin, there are probably gardening positions on the town budget for someone to keep the flowerbeds at peak appearance, despite the occasional snatch by a pony who just can't resist the snack urge. And that's why they have the park patrol, though with his trainig, I would imagne that Spartan didn't even notice any park guards while he avoided them to collect his bouquet..
This is going to be intense.
855497 awh! not true! I just happen to have a hangup about thee's and thou's. shutting up now
He liked that. He liked a big, powerful stallion in place of all the strangeness and even feminine ponies in Ponyville.
Big Mac took the time to admire the strange pony’s breastplate.
“Meet me in the baths at the spa, and we shall ____ in private.”
“I shall be away with Big Macintosh for a bit.”
“Ah! A stallion’s night out, huh? I’m glad you two have become such good `friends`!”
Twilight got the sudden very real image of a pair of handsome, burly stallions … while lathering themselves in the spa, but SQUASHED the thought before it colored her face scarlet.
“So, what dost thou think? Want to do it?”
He ______ a little harder… Harder. Harder!
“I knew I could count on thee, Big Mac.” Spartan said with some affection…
Perhaps he would do well to pay … a visit soon also. With the proper protection of course--
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I'M SORRY! I'M SO SO SORRY!
It's your fault for telling us you were dropping hints, though. I think I also need to go back and count how many times you capitalize the word `thrust`, now. Twice in this chapter alone. You do that every time you use the word, don't you?
This is too much fun, even if I'm completely wrong!
Another great chapter. I'm curious as to what Spartan has planned, but I have my ideas.
855949 Why THRUST if you don't do it with ghusto?
Besides, the mares deserve to read some stallion beefcake at some point. Its not like the Spartans were at all squeamish about male/male affection. XD
Its guy love. And its different form being gay!
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Honestly, you should know me better than that. But you do deserve an explanation. I'm on vacation, and I was dragged off to a museum in the middle of reading this, and thus unable to make a comment.
You have my sincere apologies for that, and from what I read, this is an awesome chapter. Keep it up!
-Vivas Noctus!
(Sent via mobile)
856218 Bromance?
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Thank you so much for this! We don't have enough of this in our era. :/ Guy hug guy? Must be gay! ...
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I just want to hug my frien-he-he-he-hends!
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DEAR CELESTIA, that's even worse! Not only do you now have a picture of Spartan in his bare coat (which he sees as 'dishonorable' and embarrassing), but you're also looking at it in a romantic sense as well. And all of this without his permission: Despicable.
856315 Castor: Not me! My unicorn Twin brother. It's in his ... {whispers "stash"} that only he and I knows how to get in, or even of it's existence. The instant I gave it to him, no longer my problem.
Pollux: DUDE!
Castor: . . . Oops.
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I don't think it's illegal, per se, just that it's not quite dignified.
He was on a public street, so taking a picture isn't illegal, as far as I know, but it's more a matter of disrespect for his feelings.
And for looking at it romantically... well, whatever you do with it in your own home is your business. But might I say, that's kind of creepy and stalkerish.
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By farther plans, I mean like getting it onto EqD and such.
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That depends on whether you're using US Customary or Metric. (The author is wrong either way.)
Here in the US we use the "short ton," which is exactly 2000 pounds. Alternatively, it's 907.18 kg.
Metric uses the "long ton," which is 1000 kg. Alternatively, it's 2204.622622 (repeating) pounds.
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Just kidding around.
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Aegis, every minute you don't update this, my soul withers away.
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You make me laugh out loud!
Yeah, I LOL, literally.
C'mere for hugs~
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No ... you're a walking bush ... tree ... thing ...
I'm so confused!
I am eager to see what comes next!
Darling, is the next update is going to be a "physical" one? Will Spartan and Big Mac have a prizefight? How will the relationship continue to develop? Spartan is feeling to honorable for Twilight (), I get the sense that feral emotions beyond competitiveness might come into this next chapter
Caio darling
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While correct that in the US we use a short ton and when non-specified and spelled as such it is automatically assumed you mean a short ton, and the exact amount of a metric ton is indeed ~2205, however, a long ton is 2240 (originally an imperial ton) which was from the traditional British system where they used stones as a measurement and it is commonly accepted that a long ton or metric ton need not be distinguished between the two due to such little difference.
To clarify:
Short ton: 2000 pounds (used in America)
Long ton: 2240 pounds (used in France and English speaking countries, also known as an imperial ton)
Metric ton: 2204.622622... (interchangeable with a long ton unless spelled tonne which specifically refers to its metric amount)
However in hindsight I guess I shouldn't have used the spelling tonne.