You can't give up your laughter 'cause you're scared of a little pain; rainbows won't up the sky unless you let it rain. —Autumn Blaze
After being sentenced to six to eight weeks in Princess Twilight's dungeon for attempting to evict Fluttershy under ridiculous circumstances, Sugar Berry readies herself for her time in custody. But will her sentence be cut short?
A sequel to Six to Eight Weeks Dungeon for Ocalhoun's Big 250K Contest.
Punchline spoilers in the comments!
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Well done. Very amusing and I honestly laughed at the punchline.
Soft balled it, man. You should have called up your uncle-moosey to help with this, we could have gotten it M-rated
7023385 Come on, you know I don't roll that way.
I only put the tag up because of implicative purposes.
Nice game reference at the end brah
He's right, though. Settlers ruins friendships.
If you really want to wreck an entire group of friends, get a game of Diplomacy going.
7027642 Amen, brother. I lost so many friends in high school playing that after class haha.
...huh. I was expecting Monopoly at the end there.
I've heard bad things about Diplomacy, but I find that it's actually quite a good game if you play it against anonymous people on the internet that you're unlikely to ever meet or recognise again.
7030306 I actually was going to put that in also, but I thought one was enough.
I laughed. I laughed a LOT lol
good job 
This was utterly amazing
For my family, the game that ruins more relationships is a tie between Monopoly and Uno.
Yeah, my family's kinda weird.
7032872 I wouldn't consider that weird. Monopoly is the cliche family/friendship ruiner, and Uno can be friggin' brutal when it comes to dropping those +4s.
Like I mentioned previously, I was going to put Monopoly in as well, but it's been so long since I've played it, and I've honestly played more potential friendship-ruining games of Settlers in the more recent past. So many times have I heard, "Seriously? WTF, bro, come on!"
7032881 Hmm. Does this Settlers thing has any relations to PC Settlers game series?
7032962 If I'm thinking about the right game series, then I don't think so. This is a reference to Settlers of Catan.
7032881 have you ever played progressive Uno? It's similar to the original, except
1 - You can lay down multiple copies of the same card.
2 - You can play a +2 or +4 in response to one given to you causing the next player to have to draw the cumulative amount
Seeing the look on someone's face when they realize they have to draw 14 cards is sooo satisfying... as long as it's not you doing the drawing. Yeah, we've had family members walk away from the table crying over card disputes.
Brutal.
7033130 Oh yeah, I've played that way. Used to do that on my breaks when I was in my teens and working at a snack bar over the summer. If you thought you could hate your co-workers before, that black deck of cards would destroy any chance of civility for the rest of the day.
You're reacting this strongly to Settlers? Better not look in the unlabeled box under the bed, then.
7039174 Oh no, I personally love Settlers. I just haven't played Diplomacy in years, and it didn't come to mind. Monopoly would have been my other choice.
Looks like I have a story to read...
That is the laziest horsepun
just...ever
Pretty enjoyable, and less of a revisionist fic than I suspected from the title. I do think Sugar gave in way too quickly, though. In fact, her whole personality seems to have been nerfed to the point where she's mostly just a regular pony now. The Sugar Berry I wrote about sure wouldn't agree to violate regulations so easily. It would have been a much longer (and more entertaining) struggle between her will and Discord trying to gross her out through implications. That said, I was still reading this with a smile on my face the whole way through, so there is that.
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A review for ocalhoun's big 250k contest.
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7150717 Hmm, that's fair. I probably could have done a little more with Discord's antics before getting Sugar to finally give in. I'm glad to hear it was enjoyable enough, and brought a smile to your face. This was my first entry into any contest, so I wasn't really expecting it to rank too high, but it did get what I would consider a pretty good reception. Thanks for the opportunity!
I expected Monopoly, but oh well. Don't know what is Settlers of Patan though
7189903 Ha. It's a slight variation of Settlers of Catan. Another friendship destroyer.
7190288 I played that game once. We had to set a swear jar up.
Oh this~
Groaaaaaaaaans
........
could be worse. She could have, GASP, Monopoly