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InfinitySlayer


I teleport in and out of reality quite often. This odd characteristic may or may not be of my own doing.

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In some fashion or another, Adagio has always had the gift of sound in her life, either by her own musical talent or from the constant babbling of her cohorts. When that gift is suddenly torn away from her soul, she is forced to reconcile debates in her mind previously concealed by the music she once possessed.

Fleeing from her problems is one thing, but having to deal with those issues tormenting her conscious directly is quite another.

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This was really good, and quite successful, please do not put stories that do not have more than 5 downvotes into our grouP\p
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This is a Twilight's Reviews review.

I really liked how you used examples and metaphors to make the reader visualize what was happening, the descriptive words and vocabulary were excellent. I also liked the internal struggle Adagio was facing when she left the other sirens, that was well thought-out and creative, it also helped express the character, too. The length of the story was fine and didn't seem too much rushed up, and I spotted very few, maybe even just one, grammar mistakes. Overall, the plot was finely organized, you've done well for a sad story.

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Yeah... I guess it is.

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