I teleport in and out of reality quite often. This odd characteristic may or may not be of my own doing.
Twilight didn't expect anything to go wrong. But she forgot to account for Pinkie Pie. Now she has to deal with Princess Celestia being Pinkie Pie and vice versa, before Pinkie Pie destroys Equestria with weapons of mass destruction cupcakes.
By royal decree, let their be fire cupcakes!
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Whelp!...That happened!
Well that was short...but it was a good fic while it lasted!
*blink...blink...blink* And um yah... Wow good story just a bit wow
Interesting story, but I found a few things you may want to edit.
One problem is you consistently write "preform" instead of "perform", Secondly, I'm pretty sure that should be "performed on him".
First, that should be "suspiciously", and there needs to be spaces where you wrote, "needs two helpers".
That should be "throne".
I'm pretty sure that should be "hay".
And lastly, you forgot the the quotation mark at the beginning of the sentence.
That was funny. But it could have been longer. Maybe some sequels with the other Elements?
The lesson: don't leave your door unlocked when practicing mind swapping spells.
but then, pinkie would probaly come in the window or something.
I enjoyed reading your story! In fact, I featured it in a blog post of mine. It's not much, but I hope it'll get you a couple of extra views. Keep up the good work!
Ending was rushed. Other than that, t'was funny.
pinkie with god level powers...
welp. in the words of the Dadric god of madness...
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okay you have clearly not met Twilight Sparkle. If it weren't for her friend Fluttershy, she would probably be the humblest of the Mane Six. Negative points for characterization, not to mention the slow rising action that surrounds the above example, which I wasn't expecting just going from the description.
when did Spike... You know...
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well, at least you have grasped the definition of Pinkie Pie's personality: unexpected/random
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see, as long as Pinkie Pie and/or Discord are alive and well, that becomes a dangerous thing to wish for. I guess that's one thing even a 1000-year-old alicorn cannot account for: Pinkie Pie!
I wonder if there is a horse pun for that country name. It seems out of place in Equestria, but then again, we are dealing with Pinkie Pie here...
Twilight, come to the Pink side, we have cupcakes...
As far as comedy, you nailed it at a few points (particularly with Pinkie Pie telling the ponies at day court what she thought of them), but everything else might need a bit of work. Take that Deus ex Machina conflict resolution, for instance. *Hooves touch* and everything is back to normal... Really? And don't get me wrong, a giant cupcake in place of Mt Canterlot (as I choose to call it) is hilarious, at least for the visualization if nothing else, but if that's all you have, that is actually somewhat disappointing.
that was great! very funny and very entertaining. please write more.
I for one welcome our new party crazed overlord