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Ember Flare


I live in the United States, and love to write and read MLP fanfiction.

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Flash Sentry is called, and transfered to be the Princess of Friendship's guard. Aka, Twilight Sparkle. He wants to do everything in his power to protect the young princess, but in doing so, he slowly falls in love with Twilight. He's never felt like this for any pony else, and doesn't want to loose that feeling. But there is a few things standing in the way him with his love for her, and Twilight. First, his history, most ponies that know his background, hate him. Second, himself, Flash is too afraid of getting to close to her. Which could lead her danger. Third, a specific pony who says that he is in love with the young princess. (Twilight). And last, fear, Flash is too afraid that even if the truth does come out that she won't except him. He thinks it is too bizzard that a princess would fall in love with a stallion like him. But little does he know that Twilight is in love with him, but is too shy to admit it. So the battle of love is who will admit their feelings first, without getting hurt.

Cover art by dm29

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 37 )

Prepare to set phazers on Teasing.

NOPONY EXPECTS THE SPANISH INQUISITION

Omg! Can't wait until the next one!:pinkiegasp:

This is good but the chapters always feel...I don't know, stiff? Otherwise, this is a nice slow little love story. Well done!

Drama is always the best element to have in any story

Comment posted by Patata1312 deleted Oct 13th, 2022
Comment posted by Patata1312 deleted Oct 13th, 2022

I saw a few Disney references in there... :pinkiehappy:

Your Disney reference makes me happy :rainbowkiss:

DEAR LORD I SHIP IT YOU ARE A MASTER WRITER

"It's just..." Cadence explained. "Do you think Flash and your sister like each other?"

Shining got a little frustrated. "Oh, not this. And I know now why you had Flash be Twily's guard."

The pink alicorn smiled. "But I haven't been able to play matchmaker for a long time, this will be fun." She said. "Plus I am for certain that they are perfect for one another

Well twilight your sister in law did had a hand in this after all.

Shining and Cadence were in love before uping themselves into royalty.

Comment posted by Patata1312 deleted Oct 13th, 2022

Did I just tell you which season took place?

Comment posted by Patata1312 deleted Oct 13th, 2022
Comment posted by Ember Flare deleted Jun 26th, 2016
Comment posted by Ember Flare deleted Jun 26th, 2016

I like the story, its nice to have a heart warming fic every now and then.

Although, I have to admit, I find Shining easily dismissing his worries about Flash hurting Twilight after Cadence "assures" him kinda, off? I expected Shining, to, I dunno, retaliate more?

But seriously, keep up the good work.

Vanilla Twilight... I love that song

Comment posted by Patata1312 deleted Oct 13th, 2022

7359287 Thank you very much. :twilightsmile: And I will try to work on that more. But thank you.

So the stealing Cutie Mark thing was also a nightmare he had.

7360837 No, it wasn't. Between the parts of the building crashing and him waking up was the nightmare.

OMGOODNESS!!! U like read my mind!! I thought that Vanilla Twilight fit perfectly with this couple!! WOO! Awesome!:rainbowkiss::heart::yay:

OMG THAT WAS SOOOO FUNNY HAHAHAHA!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

"Good, just know this." Captain Armor rushed over to him "If she gets hurt, then you will regret it all your life. DO YOU HEAR SENTRY!?!?" He yelled

im preeeetttyyy sure shining just scared the crap out of flash lol:rainbowlaugh:

This chapter made me cry.... And I'm a boy.
Please, Please, Please update soon.

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Hopefully Flash didn't wet his armor.

The tease is strong with this one. :moustache:

I sense a kidnapping on the horizon.

Next time: Twilight visits Flash in the hospital.

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