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NorrisThePony


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A dumping ground of flashfics, random vignettes, contest submissions, half-baked horror ideas, and more.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 20 )

You get a like just for the title. I have no idea why I find it to be so amusing, but I do.

It's a shame this was just a little diversion, and not a full on story. This captured my attention quick, and makes me a bit sad that it did not continue passed this phase.

This has been the most interesting take on the new mane six I've ever read thus far, and I liked it quite a bit. I find Kicheko to be a pretty interesting character, and I really liked what you did with Skyla. I honestly wish there was more to this, but of course, it's up to you what you want to write about in the end.

7191022 I do like the characters myself, too, and I really did put alot of planning into them. It's more the story I had no interest in continuing, but I would really like to do something with these characters.

I'm glad you enjoyed either way! :twilightsmile:

7191045 I don't know what it is with authors anthology's in there publishes, but they seem to always have some of the most interesting ideas. I think their too overlooked due to them not being full stories; that doesn't mean they're not good by any word.

Nice one. And ageing Twilight up removes any trace of creepines too.

7292162 It does, yeah. I find that the age-difference thing is the biggest turn-off to the ship for most people, but it also has an easy solution.

Also, I often like to age Twilight a few centuries up just to prove that she can be long-lived without being horribly angsty and depressed.

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For me it was never the age difference. My problem is the power dynamic a young Twilight has with Celestia.

Impressively done. I must agree, those vitamins were quite disgusting.

"Don't patronize me, woman,"

:rainbowlaugh:

The entire concept of this is completely demon racist. I expected better from you.

I've reviewed this story HERE!

Celestia, however, continued on as though she hadn't heard what Twilight had said. "I mean, at first I was like, bruh, double-you-tee-eff! But then I realized that they were lowkey kinda based in their assessment of me. So... meet a new version of Princess Celestia who is absolutely fire! "

I'm pressing charges for the damages reading this kind of dialogue did to my entire being.

Oh hey, this looks familiar.

Well this is an elaborate way of saying that Cadence and Chrysalis are twins.

Caught a typo.

Twilight flicked her trail at Celestia...
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it is with cautious anticipation that I look forwards to this next chapter in my life.

It’s the little details like that in her language that really show what a mark this outcome would’ve left on her. It just feels completely unthinkable for the circumstances to lead to this; it reads like she’s in a state of shock.

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It's just what happens when I get into the head of a character while writing about a plot thread I dislike

That was a good chapter.

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