I am the leader of the Titan Defenders. The shield of those who cannot fight.
John is a bass guitarist and the only thing he hates more than silence is being alone. Thankfully his unique white haired friend Angelle goes with him when he is pulled through a portal of some kind that lead to a world of multi-colored magical talking ponies of all things.
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7053606 His problems with authority will be explained later.
There was some cringey parts, but keep on writing. 'Cus I'll be waiting
If John and Angelle were voiced, what would they sound like?
7486939 Angelle would sound kind off like Amy Lee. John would have a slightly low voice
7513753 I understand what you are saying and I am sorry. I was having issues coming up with things to lead up to her death. That was one of the five or six ways I thought of. As for his power that will be the only time it will be that strong. He has about 19-20 years of mana build-up in his system that he would have never known about if not for him coming to Equestria. That was him using most of said build up at once. I will probably go back and rewrite the chapter once I can get more of the story built up
7620744 thanks. It took me a while to find one I liked
You know. I find it very bothersome that people down vote stories without giving a reason on why. How do the people that down vote without saying anything expect us authors to improve if we don't know how we are messing up.
I only put this rant in the comments of this story because it is the only one I have this problem on. It is still annoying though
i find it rather disturbing how quickly he forgot Angelle.