Oh Christ, you need an editor and bad. Reading through this just made my head hurt.

"This is the portal to the land of two walkers. To travel, one must sacrifice one part of themselves to open the portal. But be warned as you may never get back what you sacrificed. But you will be granted your greatest wish you desire. But be warned this portal is a one way trip to the world of two walkers. But also to claim your wish you must accomplish the goal the stone gives you. To begin, tell the tone what you wish to sacrifice about yourself."

I think every English teacher/Grammar Nazi in the world felt a disturbance in the force at this. Do no use "But be warned..." twice in a single paragraph and I think you meant stone.

Then back to Equis so I can rule Equestria and maybe all of Equis to.

You've already stated that she can't go back which means you're either trying to go for the "Pay attention, god dammit!" route and it's just coming off weird or you're deliberately making Chrysalis a brain-dead jack off.

Get an editor and take it slow. Read it through when you're done. If you find yourself hating what you're reading, fix it and try again until you're satisfied. Do this and by the end you will have a story you can be proud of.

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Yeah, grammar isn't one of my strong points. So I've slowly learned to go slow and make sure everything flows as one unit. I will be looking for an editor to look over this story later on. I hope you still stick around for the other chapters, though I promise I will go slow when proofreading it.