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After the events of "The Cutie Remark," Starlight Glimmer stays at Twilight's castle until she finds a home in Ponyville and develops a new respect for her enemy turned mentor when she discovers that they both have something in common: that they once had sanctuaries that were destroyed by their most hated enemies.
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6926326 This is good advice.
6926326 I am probably going to need help on that in terms of editing. How good are your editing skills? Or I could have someone like Paste Lights or Word Worthy look at this.
Interesting. It's a different perspective of how you see things in the show. That's good.
Interesting story. I've read plenty of Starlight is doubtful of being forgiven stories but this one kind of stands out.
Most probably because it reminds me too much of Sunset and Twilight's chat in Rainbow Rocks
This is a nice story. I Like the fact that it's about Starlight's attempt to move on which isn't that easy.
I would guess that Starlight knows Tirek's name though after all he is the ultimate Evil for ponies.
6928092 But without this:
6928728 My objective on that was to reference Voldemort aka "He Who Must Not Be Named" from the Harry Potter stories.
6928728 Chrysalis gives him a run for his bits, though.
i enjoyed this.
What? That is worded weirdly.
Actually both of them are very much capable of changing the past. They just learned from experience that it isn't good idea.
Everything can be taken away. Something could happen that sours the bond you share and then there is mortality that comes with living. (Unless you practice necromancy, but can that ever be the same?)
Just one little nitpick. Twilight doesn’t have to keep saying her name constantly.