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Catrina37


FLuttercord is my favorite shipping and I enjoy art and writing

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Megan is enjoying life in Ponyville while living with the Apple Family. The Mane 6 (minus Rainbow Dash) are handling a manticore problem, while Megan and Rainbow Dash receive word that Ahuizotl has captured Daring Do and is preparing to take her to Tambelon. They set out to rescue her, but Megan winds up kidnapped by Cabelleron and his flunkies. Now the Mane 6 have to rescue Megan, Rainbow Dash, and Daring Do before they are taken straight to Grogar.

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Is this part of a series of fanfics?

I see the weird lettering you told me about.

Can you fix it since you can just go back?

"Over there is City Hall. It's where Mayor Mare works,” Applejack says, “We mostly use it for important events and weddings."

Weird lettering in place of quotation marks.

"Oh! You must be Megan!” Fluttershy says excitedly, “Sweetie Belle told me so much about you and your animal ranch!"

Same here.

"it's also where Pinkie Pie lives," Apple Bloom says, "She's the best party planner in Equestria. She's really good at bringing smiles."

Capital I for "it's".

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Huh. I thought I got rid of them.

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Can you edit the rest of the errors I found yet?

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I will. I just didn't have any time.

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