Often a single day, a single event can change our lives forever. But even when that event is over, life will find a new equilibrium of sorts. It’s just a matter of accepting this new ‘normal’.
As much as I'm sad to read that story will be on hiatus, I understand that. You gotta have priorites in life. But I (and many other readers) will wait for your return. Take care!
Will miss this story, glad to see its not dropped but you just got RL things, which is good. I look forward to this when you can pick it back up again.
Gotta love their chemistry, but I do smell blood in the waters, something tells me there'll be some fights about boundaries before this is all over. We'll wait anxiously for your return
“Think we can convince them to dig it up?” Rainbow asked Twi. “Hmm… let’s see,” Twi said as she pulled an imaginary phone from her side. “Hello? Yes, I’d like to request permission to dig up Stonehenge. Why? Because magical ponies from another world said the legendary sword Excalibur might be buried underneath it. Hello?”
No worries, it's life, things come up and we don't always have the free time to do all the things we'd like. That being said, I will latch on to the next chapter like a ravenous pitbull.
I like this version of Cadence. I hope we see more of her in the future. Really sad though that I have to wait until April for this to be updated. But better to have to wait for greatness than you getting burned out and never finishing.
This chapter has some ultra weird incest aspects going on for poor Twilight. Giving not only yourself an orgasm in a weird yin-yang manner, but also your sister-in-law, and her aunt who's more or less your aunt too.
I liked this chapter, especially the happy ending , but I do have one complaint. Cadance browbeating Twilight about the sex thing. Cadance loves Twilight and knows her better than just about anypony, I'm pretty sure she'd appeal to Twilight's logical side for discussion, rather than just go "you need to learn about this, deal with it." Even Rainbow/Dash weren't willing to force Twilight into it, and we all know how much they want to get the Twi's to open up about their sexuality. Yeah it might have made the chapter run on a little longer, but doing it the way it was just makes Cadance out to be a little bit of a villain.
Is Cadence grouping Twilight and Rainbow to imply that their bond is stronger than the one between Twilight and Dash? Will Rainbow ever stop being an ass? Will Boss get herself some hot flank action? Will they ever properly thank Rarity for the wonderful new wardrobe? Is Celestia actually straight? Is Discord male? Stay tuned to find out!
I'm starting to get the sense that the overarching conflict in this sequel really is going to involve how Rainbow unconsciously marginalises Twi's interests and passions outside of sex. Or maybe I'm projecting, because that's what I want. The more I see her unfailing devotion to derailing every conversation that's even halfway intelligent, the more frustrating it gets. She said she wants to get better, but being consistently inconsiderate isn't how you do that. It's almost as frustrating that Twi often lets it happen. Even Dash is telling her to chill.
All that aside, I have this funny feeling that the human visitors are going to fuck a lot of ponies before they go home. Also, Twi will probably end up pregnant. Awkwardly, Dash turns out to be the sire.
6973152 speaking as a stubborn egghead, there are some lessons that logic shuts the brain down with. In those instances, the browbeating and beatings will continue until the lesson sticks. At least that was my reasoning for writing/not altering others' writing in that section.
The expression "so smart you're stupid" can apply easily.
Another great chapter i was a little dissapointed when cadence teaches twilight to contain her orgasm waves and very happy with what Dash did :D When i saw on hiatus i panicked, but 4-5 weeks isnt too bad. Please come back to us soon though, too many great stories have gone into haitus and never returned :(
The only good hiatus; When life is going so GOOD you have to take time off from writing.
Enjoy yourself, and I look forward to when you pick back up! I always enjoyed how genuine your characters' interactions felt in the last story, and I'm happy to say that trend has continued with this one.
This was a great chapter It looks like they all had fun and I'm sure Luna really needed the release in the end I'm sure many interesting nights will happen from this point on. It's shame that I will have to wait so long for the next chapter I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you but I can be patient
I love just how willing to participate Luna is.
As much as I'm sad to read that story will be on hiatus, I understand that. You gotta have priorites in life. But I (and many other readers) will wait for your return. Take care!
Oh man, Twilight is going to be so embarrassed, and pissed I imagine. I think Dash is going to be sleeping on the metaphorical couch for a while.
and also there were three places where you had the box instead of a question mark
6971840 Well Luna IS best princess...
6971977 I think you're referring to the interrobangs ("‽"). You should be able to see them; check your font.
Will miss this story, glad to see its not dropped but you just got RL things, which is good. I look forward to this when you can pick it back up again.
The fun has been doubled....
Noooooooooooooo Nooooooooooooooooooooo. Thanks for the heads up. but one more Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
life first always
Gotta love their chemistry, but I do smell blood in the waters, something tells me there'll be some fights about boundaries before this is all over.
We'll wait anxiously for your return
Yeah that would go well.
Want it need it is how I feel about all your stories. Thursday's will be a little more sfw for March
No worries, it's life, things come up and we don't always have the free time to do all the things we'd like.
That being said, I will latch on to the next chapter like a ravenous pitbull.
I like this version of Cadence. I hope we see more of her in the future.
Really sad though that I have to wait until April for this to be updated. But better to have to wait for greatness than you getting burned out and never finishing.
This chapter has some ultra weird incest aspects going on for poor Twilight. Giving not only yourself an orgasm in a weird yin-yang manner, but also your sister-in-law, and her aunt who's more or less your aunt too.
Be safe and Be well. i love your stories. if you have to vanish just dont stay gone. like those worthless heart containers in zelda
I liked this chapter, especially the happy ending , but I do have one complaint. Cadance browbeating Twilight about the sex thing. Cadance loves Twilight and knows her better than just about anypony, I'm pretty sure she'd appeal to Twilight's logical side for discussion, rather than just go "you need to learn about this, deal with it." Even Rainbow/Dash weren't willing to force Twilight into it, and we all know how much they want to get the Twi's to open up about their sexuality. Yeah it might have made the chapter run on a little longer, but doing it the way it was just makes Cadance out to be a little bit of a villain.
Dash- *gropes Twi's ass full palm* "Well you're always a handful."
Is Cadence grouping Twilight and Rainbow to imply that their bond is stronger than the one between Twilight and Dash? Will Rainbow ever stop being an ass? Will Boss get herself some hot flank action? Will they ever properly thank Rarity for the wonderful new wardrobe? Is Celestia actually straight? Is Discord male? Stay tuned to find out!
I'm starting to get the sense that the overarching conflict in this sequel really is going to involve how Rainbow unconsciously marginalises Twi's interests and passions outside of sex. Or maybe I'm projecting, because that's what I want. The more I see her unfailing devotion to derailing every conversation that's even halfway intelligent, the more frustrating it gets. She said she wants to get better, but being consistently inconsiderate isn't how you do that. It's almost as frustrating that Twi often lets it happen. Even Dash is telling her to chill.
All that aside, I have this funny feeling that the human visitors are going to fuck a lot of ponies before they go home. Also, Twi will probably end up pregnant. Awkwardly, Dash turns out to be the sire.
All good things in time and all that. I am so curious what the future chapters will bring.
I was smiling like an idiot, then I read the Authors Note.
Sad to hear that, man. I am, however, glad that it's a good life thing.
Excited as ever for a new chapter, even if it isn't coming for a month or so.
6973152 speaking as a stubborn egghead, there are some lessons that logic shuts the brain down with. In those instances, the browbeating and beatings will continue until the lesson sticks. At least that was my reasoning for writing/not altering others' writing in that section.
The expression "so smart you're stupid" can apply easily.
6973152 I agree with this. It was the only off moment in an otherwise fantastic chapter.
Another great chapter
i was a little dissapointed when cadence teaches twilight to contain her orgasm waves
and very happy with what Dash did :D
When i saw on hiatus i panicked, but 4-5 weeks isnt too bad.
Please come back to us soon though, too many great stories have gone into haitus and never returned :(
I'm imagining that this will dissolve into a huge orgy including the main 6 the princesses and the humans
The only good hiatus; When life is going so GOOD you have to take time off from writing.
Enjoy yourself, and I look forward to when you pick back up! I always enjoyed how genuine your characters' interactions felt in the last story, and I'm happy to say that trend has continued with this one.
Cheers!
This was a great chapter It looks like they all had fun and I'm sure Luna really needed the release in the end I'm sure many interesting nights will happen from this point on. It's shame that I will have to wait so long for the next chapter I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you but I can be patient
for this story I am willing to weight.
Love this fic
I'll have what they're having.
Starting to build up my hype again and so I was curious if April 7th still looks like a good estimate now that we aren't as far out from it.
7093556 April 7th still looks good.
How the events seem to devolve into orgies around these four, I will never fully understand...
Not that I don't appreciate, mind...
Next stop: Celestia. She has to get in on this. I think she's been needing a release for the past few decades, don't you?
And after that? PONYVILLE. The entirety of Ponyville. That simply must happen.