Often a single day, a single event can change our lives forever. But even when that event is over, life will find a new equilibrium of sorts. It’s just a matter of accepting this new ‘normal’.
So so very good, I am loving the interaction with Cadence and the other ponies as well... it's also great to see things progressing with a wider variety of characters. Now I am dying to see what happens when they meet more of their friends counterparts.. or even shining armor or some of the other ponies...
I love Cadance's reactions to anything dealing with Twi and Rainbow and Twilight and Dash love lives. I could just see her grin getting bigger and bigger with each passing moment. I wonder if Twilight will mention to Cadance the whole magic climax thing?
“For that very reason I was forced to leave him all those years ago,” she whispered in a low tone.
You skipped over that little bombshell without even breakin' stride. Here's hopin' you have plans to circle back to that juicy titbit.
“Well, yeah. She is your sister-in-law after all, and probably fucking your brother like a damn goddess,” Rainbow said.
The pink alicorn chuckled. “So I am that similar to your Cadance. Interesting.”
“Rainbow, Cadance!” Twilight yelled.
I flamin' pissed myself!
I'm thoroughly enjoyin' this story so far. You're layin' a good, solid foundation before jumpin' straight into the 'six legged pony'. There's nothin' like good foreplay. Bravo and bring on next Thursday.
“If you’ll excuse me though, I have a… Pinkie Promise to complete before somepony—other than me—breaks the laws of physics and reality in retribution.”
Rainbow, your utter lack of impulse control is going to get you killed some day, would you just shut up? Why are you only tolerable when the chips are down!?
Calling it now: Discord isn't actually suppressing anything.
Either because dippy-skippy spacey-wacey stuff makes the current arrangement completely stable or because he wants the worlds to merge. (I'm not sure which I'd like more...)
6949691 It's a reference to the comics. Celestia fell in love with an alternate dimension Sombra (a dimension where he was the benevolent ruler of Equestria and Celestia and Luna were both evil), but she had to leave him in order to prevent both dimensions from getting screwed.
The whole merging thing comes from there, too. Like, when evil Celestia got injured, good Celestia felt the pain as well.
“‘Tis ridiculous. Surely it wouldn’t be that big of a threat if he’d stop for a few seconds to send them home!” Luna protested. “Care to see? It could be fun,” Discord said as he raised up a claw. As he was about to snap his fingers he said, “And don’t call me Shirley.”
6949658 I'm not sure. He's been under Cadence's influence for a at least a while now, so he might not care that Dash is a mare. On top of that, she is the element of Loyalty, so that all but rules out cheating and stuff. He might just think Twilight could have done a lot worse. Zo... 0?
But yeah, it is fun to imagine him freaking about it
That was great So very cute, I am really liking the interaction you are having with the character here I'm so looking forward to the trip to Ponyville and the meeting of the others. I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.
Hmm, I dunno. The first story was nice, except for the overabundance of sex. I mean, I actually like it when stories don't shy away from that part of romance. But too much is still too much, half way through I started to skim the sex as most of it was just about the mechanics of it.
Now, this story seems promising, except Rainbow rubs me the wrong way. It wouldn't matter that much, but you have made a big deal about how similar the parallel versions are supposed to be, and the human version seems to be even more inconsiderate than the S1 RD. At least S1 RD generally got it that she was acting badly when it was pointed out. So the human version basically going "Who cares that our actions could cause a lot of suffering, I'm busy making sex jokes" just feels.. off.
Actually, now that I think about it, I kinda hope it's intentional. I got the same feeling in the previous story, it's just a lot more obvious now. Would be nice to see some actual differences between the parallel versions. After all, it seems to me that the pony versions have had a lot more serious (and dangerous) stuff happening to them.
6955967 >>skipping sex Yeah, I was too. There are only so many ways sex can be interesting, after all. About the RD thing... I honestly like her that way. Can't say I didn't laugh at the sex jokes. in fact, I laughed at them all. S1 RD was just egotistical, this RD just is extremely lighthearted. At least that's what I see.
This is really adorable and I am loving these interactions though the suspense is killing me. I can't wait to see how the rest of Twilight's friends react to the Human ones. Also an orgy with Cadence involved but I can wait on that one.
Edit: I just realized that this is the first time I have ever seen an Airplane! joke on this site. I don't know why but I just found that really odd.
Twilight, all friends fight,” Celestia said. “The more important the conversation, the more severe the fight tends to be. What matters is not that you fight, but that you make up afterwards.”
I'm not really sure how I've never fought with my friends. My cousin and I on the other hand used to beat the shit out of each other all the time when we were younger. Just for shits and giggles.
So so very good, I am loving the interaction with Cadence and the other ponies as well... it's also great to see things progressing with a wider variety of characters. Now I am dying to see what happens when they meet more of their friends counterparts.. or even shining armor or some of the other ponies...
suddenly I have the idea of they commenting about some of the toys and begin to copy them with magic, selling them.
well this was a fun chapter but here is something you missed
good point
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interrrrrrrrrobangs!
on a scale of 1 to 10, how much of freakout would Shining be in when he found out his little sister fucked and is dating a mare?
next few chapterse
Why do I have a feeling that Discord is going to ruin another dimension to save this one.
6949540 11 when he finds out the whole story
I love Cadance's reactions to anything dealing with Twi and Rainbow and Twilight and Dash love lives. I could just see her grin getting bigger and bigger with each passing moment. I wonder if Twilight will mention to Cadance the whole magic climax thing?
Keep it up Twidashforever!
You skipped over that little bombshell without even breakin' stride. Here's hopin' you have plans to circle back to that juicy titbit.
I flamin' pissed myself!
I'm thoroughly enjoyin' this story so far. You're layin' a good, solid foundation before jumpin' straight into the 'six legged pony'. There's nothin' like good foreplay. Bravo and bring on next Thursday.
Nice chapter, good work.
Rainbow, your utter lack of impulse control is going to get you killed some day, would you just shut up? Why are you only tolerable when the chips are down!?
Calling it now: Discord isn't actually suppressing anything.
Either because dippy-skippy spacey-wacey stuff makes the current arrangement completely stable or because he wants the worlds to merge. (I'm not sure which I'd like more...)
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It's a reference to the comics. Celestia fell in love with an alternate dimension Sombra (a dimension where he was the benevolent ruler of Equestria and Celestia and Luna were both evil), but she had to leave him in order to prevent both dimensions from getting screwed.
The whole merging thing comes from there, too. Like, when evil Celestia got injured, good Celestia felt the pain as well.
lol i get it
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I'm not sure. He's been under Cadence's influence for a at least a while now, so he might not care that Dash is a mare. On top of that, she is the element of Loyalty, so that all but rules out cheating and stuff. He might just think Twilight could have done a lot worse. Zo... 0?
But yeah, it is fun to imagine him freaking about it
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I don't...
Unless it's a pun of the swirl part of Starswirl.
6951741 it's a movie refrence, i won't say which
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Ah, which movie?
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I'd rather not give it away, but hint: it's an old parody movie from the '80s
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You must have edited at last minute because it didn't say the "i won't say which" part at first.
Guessing game... hmmm. I don't know. Honestly, it's something I don't get anyway so looking it up won't really be beneficial to me.
6951781 Oh 80s movie, that means it is prime for a remaking.
6952187 There is just so much hype I am building up for that and other events.
Definitely enjoyed this chapter.
6952948 potentially
loveitloveitloveitloveit!!!!
That was great So very cute, I am really liking the interaction you are having with the character here I'm so looking forward to the trip to Ponyville and the meeting of the others. I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.
Hmm, I dunno. The first story was nice, except for the overabundance of sex. I mean, I actually like it when stories don't shy away from that part of romance. But too much is still too much, half way through I started to skim the sex as most of it was just about the mechanics of it.
Now, this story seems promising, except Rainbow rubs me the wrong way. It wouldn't matter that much, but you have made a big deal about how similar the parallel versions are supposed to be, and the human version seems to be even more inconsiderate than the S1 RD. At least S1 RD generally got it that she was acting badly when it was pointed out. So the human version basically going "Who cares that our actions could cause a lot of suffering, I'm busy making sex jokes" just feels.. off.
Actually, now that I think about it, I kinda hope it's intentional. I got the same feeling in the previous story, it's just a lot more obvious now. Would be nice to see some actual differences between the parallel versions. After all, it seems to me that the pony versions have had a lot more serious (and dangerous) stuff happening to them.
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>>skipping sex
Yeah, I was too. There are only so many ways sex can be interesting, after all.
About the RD thing... I honestly like her that way.
Can't say I didn't laugh at the sex jokes. in fact, I laughed at them all.
S1 RD was just egotistical, this RD just is extremely lighthearted. At least that's what I see.
can´t wait for more. Hope for some fun Fluttershy interaction. Thanks for the good work.
Just a suggestion dash and rainbow should ask cadence for a spell that can give them a "stallionhood"
This is really adorable and I am loving these interactions though the suspense is killing me. I can't wait to see how the rest of Twilight's friends react to the Human ones. Also an orgy with Cadence involved but I can wait on that one.
Edit: I just realized that this is the first time I have ever seen an Airplane! joke on this site. I don't know why but I just found that really odd.
6952996 God I hope not. In no way would it measure up to the original.
Twilight, all friends fight,” Celestia said. “The more important the conversation, the more severe the fight tends to be. What matters is not that you fight, but that you make up afterwards.”
I'm not really sure how I've never fought with my friends.
My cousin and I on the other hand used to beat the shit out of each other all the time when we were younger. Just for shits and giggles.
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Not all fights are physical.
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Oh yeah... I dare say, the most important ones seldom are. Also, we've been given a straight example of this in action in the last part...