When Doctor Whooves first became a pony, blasted into Equestria, he'd considered it a blessing. A chance at a peaceful, normal, mortal life after so many centuries of torment. But on a quiet winter night, he shares a revelation with his wife, that this chance may have been denied him after all.
Just a short one-shot I did, because I'm working on something bigger but really didn't want to do anything with it tonight.
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not to dampen the spirits but celestia luna and spike could age with him
This story was absolutely marvelous! I loved how you presented it! So captivating, and it was genuinely heart-wrenching! Thanks for submitting this...this...feast for the eyeholes!
Y U KEEP ON WRITING SAD FICS
seriousy though, you're just too succesfull at writing sad stuff.
great story though.
729761 Fair enough. But long-lived or otherwise, I'm fairly certain dragons are still mortal. So eventually it'd just be three ponies through all of eternity. Still fairly lonely if you ask me.
729925 Thanks! I was worried my prose got a little too purple at times.
730171 And thanks to you as well. For better or worse, the next one's a dark(ish) comedy. I just like depressing people
731225 Any reason why?
731260 Which part of what I said were you referring to?
731266 The I like depressing people part.
731970 Fun, I guess?
732036 Really?
A very good yet sad story, but surly the doctor can die, if the doctor prior to pony doctor was Matt Smiths 11th then pony Dr. is the 12th and a time lord only has 12 regenrations, so he will only live for an odd thousands years, or he could off himself with AJ dies.
757244 That is true. Eventually he'd die; but a thousand years is a painfully long time to be alone, or even worse, watching generation after generation of your own family grow old and die. And Whooves as I write him would probably think it as kind of an insult to Applejack to just waste the rest of his life because he couldn't get over his grief.
759825 True very true, and i never thought of the Doctor as one to off himself, but still a masterful short story dude.
731225 but celestia and luna have sooooo many sides. it'll be way more than just three ponies