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How did it all go so wrong? A DJ in a run-down apartment, with a bottle of booze, an old record and a thorough disgust with her own situation is prepared to go out in one last blaze of indulgence, reluctant to ever look back at the life she so thoroughly ruined. But was it as bad as she remembers? How could meeting one mare lead to a chain of events so drastic? How could one mysterious spark lead her into the situation that would end her life?

Sappy, over the top description over, Author's stream of consciousness begins here. This is just something that came to my mind, and I was knocking-around in my head a while. Don't know if it's any good, and it's DEFINITELY over the top, but I thought it was at the least interesting to write, since I threw away pretty much every comfort I have in my writing style.

Let me know what you think, bad or good!

Rated Teen for drug use, some cursing, and ponies trying to off themselves. Dunno if the Dark tag fits, but it's 5 in the morning (HOLY CRAP) so I'll rejudge that after I sleep on it.
Vector by MoongazePonies, because I can't art.

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Comments ( 7 )

Hmm.. faved..
I´ll read it when i have the time^^
First Btw

Absolutely fantastic.

How dare you make me on the verge of tears! jerk... *sniff*:fluttershyouch:
~ Timid

Well that certaintly was... something. Vinyl almost committing suicide and only being saved by love. I loved it.
~ Scare

I almost started crying but in the end it was the best ever.... so glad i took the time from sleeping to read this great story

Awesome story. At first i was like:fluttershysad: then it went to :fluttercry: then to :raritycry: then :raritydespair: and at the end :twilightblush: with alot of :heart:. So many feels.

I really love these two as a couple. This story makes me love vinyl and octavia even more.

Here I am a nineteen year old male crying!!! This story is so evil to me, but so good to me at the same time. Excellent storyline. I have to say it had the ability to keep me from sleeping for well over an hour. I read this story slow and damn near memorized it first go!!! It actually kind of entranced me to the point where I couldn't look away. Wundebar!!! You have indeed made the magicks.

just utterly amazing... words cant even..

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