The world has been divided, the New Lunar Republic, led by the Princess of the Night Luna, and The Solar Empire led by the ruler of Equestria, Celestia. Grandore and his apprentice, Archmane, join with Celestia to help keep the world, to them, in order. When Grandore then finds himself leading a four pony squad, he and his apprentice start fighting familiar faces. Will they overcome the odds, or is something even bigger happening behind the scenes? (Feedback wanted)
Just going to point out a grammar error in the first paragraph.
"I will tell you, however, that it is time for a new leader in Equastria, and is not going to include Celestia."
A pretty good story however, keep up the good work!
766301 Thanks for pointing that out! I've gone through and edited these so many times that I may have got careless and missed a few...woops
So, Luna basically wants a Democracy and Celestia is to much of a bitch to let that happen... GO LUNA!
1904146 Never looked at it like that. Guess so !