After wishing she could be anywhere but the dusty old farm in Kansas, Twilight soon finds herself in a magical land filled with witches, talking scarecrows and a lot more colour than she's used to. Desperate to get back home, she must journey to the Emerald City to seek out the mysterious 'Wizard of Oz'.
Note: The forth wall will be broken somewhat.
Um... What?
possibly too much confusion and forth wall breaking, also is this an adaptation or going in it's own direction.
still good chapter.
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It is probably a little confusing. Most of the forth wall breaking would work better in a visual medium than through writing, but I wanted to do something different rather than doing a straight forward adaptation. The plan is that the characters will be sticking to the plot whilst commenting on things they deem worth commenting on. If I get a good enough idea there may be some tangents, but not by too much.
Thanks for getting through it.
6896855 cool.