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Princess Luna watches over us in our dreams, everypony knows that. But long ago, it wasn't just her. There was a whole team of ponies who could enter others' dreams and protect them. They're long gone, but Princess Luna looks to me to help her revive them.
My name is Aurora Borealis, and I am a Dreamstrider.
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I'm beginning to like this. If you are still interested in the Star Guard fanfic just enter star guard in the search bar and enter adventure/romance genre.
Interesting. It runs in a very similar vein to a story I'm working on, actually. I'll keep watching this one.
7375248 Can I get a link to that story?
If Aurora Borealis was voiced, what would she sound like?
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I haven't really put too much thought into what she sounds like, so basically whenever I imagine her speaking it's pretty middle of the road (not high or low, no real distinguishing characteristics). I'm not sure if it's been mentioned in the story yet, but right now Aurora is eight years old so just whatever a typical 8-year-old sounds like to you I guess.
Damn this is a good story
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Thank you! I'm having a lot of fun writing this, so it's nice to see others enjoying it like I am. Glad you like it.
That stick was very unassuming. Starlight wasn't carrying it around, none of the dreamers were using it to zap Starlight's cutie mark, it was just buried in the dirt?
I call bs if Aurora was supposed to find an unassuming stick in the mud (unless she was supposed to find Luna OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHH)
Pls continue this is a really good story and the story is really creative.
I wonder how powerful that demon was..
The more powerful, the more impressive that feat of Aurora's was.
I suspect you meant Dew Drop
Now I'm very excited
Um, no? Princesses can't grant Cutie Marks, nor force it to appear early.
Lot of insight on relationships being thrown around this chapter.
So not only have you externalized Nightmare Moon, you've also retconned the Tantibus to be meaningless to Luna.
Oh sure, Luna simply lied to Twilight and friends (the ponies who saved her) and put on a big show to make it seem like she was beating herself up over what she'd done, when she's actually completely unrepentant. It's not like she did anything wrong. It was all Nightmare Moon, who certainly wasn't Luna at all.
What a shallow interpretation of her character.
Is the Chieftain really playing matchmaker between Aspen and Aurora? The sly dog!
good chapter
Wholesome goodness gets my seal of approval.
good chapter
Oh sweet jeebus, I hope there's a sequel. This seems very... depressing, and I don't want it to end this way.
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Don't worry, the story doesn't end here! Can read all about it in the corresponding blog post.
Dear author, you really overdid with the "excited" word. It's kinda everywhere, in each chapter, universal question and universal answer.
Also, when "banishing" demons became "killing" demons? You may want to do something about that.
But I liked the story, thank you for writing it!
Stopped reading at chapter 38, it's getting too dark for me. Cutting tongues and such stuff. Also, it's a plot hole: if no one can speak except Listener, and Listeners are rare and there was a time when they had no Listeners, there's no one who can pass language and teach to understand spoken language. This is first plot hole, and second is if Listeners are Dreamstriders, why Luna haven't felt the birth of current Listener? The second hole might not be a hole if addresed in furter chapters, but I can't read further, so... That's it.
P.S. There's another, minor plot hole earlier, when Aurora started asking question with the intention to provoke fight between sister and her coltfriend. Started out perfectly good and reasonable, and then BAM! Sudden explosion from said sister. Too sudden, unprovoked. There was no buildup of tension, nothing. So I recommend you do something about it. Maybe add some more dialogue with more and more tension before exploding, or maybe make Aurora search her dream beforehead to find already existing tension points, like the ones demons feed off. And use that as detonator in the dialogue.