NOTE: i must give credit to the fanfic that gave me the idea. it is called the the eternal gift. and i'd like to thank my editor dragonjaj
twilight sparkle contracts a degenerative brain disease that is slowly and painfully killing her. in her time of need she looks to the relief of her family friend and mentor to help her fix a dark secret that she will not let go unfulfilled before her death
The premise is novel, if a little far-fetched in places. In all honesty though, this really would benefit from a thorough proof-read and grammar check.
Alright... when there are spelling and grammar mistakes in the description, that just turns me off. Nevertheless, if you fix those, and the ones in the story, you might be headed somewhere.
-Randomosity19
722788 ya. i have had a disability for all my life. and one of the thing is spelling. so can you help me out
don't feel bad i have thick skin
722883
If you feel comfortable with me doing that, I'd be happy to.
-Randomosity19
722909 ya i am . i am not the best whiter in the word. i am better at makeing website
If your editor approved that synopsis, it's time to find a new editor.
723212 no he only fix the story itself. and if you cant read i said in a early comment i have a disability and of the effected thing is spelling
723283
There's still spellcheck.
723292 my spell check saying it all good. i am change it to this
NOTE: i must give credit to the fanfic that gave me the idea. it is called the the eternal gift. and i'd like to thank my editor dragonjaj
twilight sparkle contracts a degenerative brain disease that is slowly and painfully killing her. in her time of need she looks to the relief of her family friend and mentor to help her fix a dark secret that she will not let go unfulfilled before her death