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This chapter is enjoyable enough but needs another pass-through. Many of the names aren't capitalized when they should be. Fluttershy, Celestia, and Twilight were the ones I caught.
Wait, Didn't Celestia turn him into stone? or it ACTUALLY was a dream? I'm sorry but this is confusing me, cause being teleported to equestria , is a dream it self (when you first arrive there) , so, care to explain?
Pirates!, maybe?
RELEASE... THE KRAKEN!!!
7921661 Dream.
Ready for the next chapter.
You know, with Aeron leaving Equestria, there's a good chance that he won't be welcomed back in once he's learned to fully control his powers.
7921693 Phew! I thought I was lost XD Tank you VERY MUCH MWAHAHAHA
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Shitty pun eh?
Interesting. I'm curious why Celestia didn't interfere. We know she knows about Aeron, she knew he was in Ponyville that whole time, so what made her decide to not do anything? Curious...
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Either that or pirates are a danger in those waters. The no light son deck rule is definitely to keep them from being seen by other ships, but there's not a whole lot to tell why...
Yey Diaries of a Madmanesqu road trip!
Maybe Aeron could make some vine propellers?
Bravo my friend!
Another grand chapter and an opening to a grander adventure!
I'm expecting cuddles in the next chapter.
Featured again.
Yay update.
not sure how to feel about it, mostly because I don't remember if he is either one of the Zebras or maybe even that weird Guard that has to watch Aeron, I guess in that chase I only would not like it that it had to be his little stalker. Yep I somehow don't enjoy some guards X certain Characters or if it are one of those that could be seen as bad or annoying.
Not sure if it was in this story, but were there the typical cult guys again?
Well at least I liked the Trixie moment here, Blueblood is nice too and after I noticed it was a dream I liked that moment too.
Sorry somehow this is one of the storys where I only remember keymoments and not everything. I hope Trixie and him are getting together on this journey and not in the end of this story.
Hhhhmmm maybe he would retreat into his core form to give Trixie some room? If he would only get some moss and he would be like a teddy bear for Trixie. I just try to create an embrassing moment for them, but you decide if you do some.
Sweet Chapter, also does that mean that Trixie brought her new Wagon with her, if so she can do magic shows over in Zebrica, not to mention while onboard the ship if Aeron has any pots or buckets with soil he could grow fruit plants for the ships crew then as extra payment.
7921736 Nice I'll have something to listen to while i write the next chapter
Okay, my prediction for the rest of this story is that Trixie and Aeron go to Zebrica. They have probably an adventure while traveling to Zebrica and one adventure in Zebrica. Aeron learns how to control his inner beast (what probably is how he finishes the second adventure). Meanwhile the Nightmare cult takes over Equestria. Aeron and Trixie find out that the Nightmare cult has taken over Equestria, and after that I don't know. That depends how long the story is going to be and how much world building we will get.
The shorter prediction is that Trixie and Aeron and quickly travel back to Equestria (with an airship) and they have to slowly take back Equestria.
OR the long version could be that Trixie and Aeron have to travel via a detour back (there are no direct airships back). Probably via the Griffonlands and the Dragonlands (here he will meet the mutilated dragons again). In the end Aeron, Trixie and Friends met on the road arrive back to Equestria and they have to take back Equestria.
Both would be cool to read.
I want to see the Mane Six and the Princesses reaction to Aeron's and Trixie's disappearances.
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Now let's hope Zebrica doesn't have an extradition treaty with Equestria.
7921754 that may not have been just a dream.
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Unpatrolled waters? Better off not making yourself a target with a simple rule like that; justifiable paranoia.
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Well, we've got ten episodes' worth of time to cover before we find out why Trixie went looking for the Alicorn Amulet. Something has to happen on this journey to cause that.
BTW, when Aeron was speaking to Blueblood, "either sic Twilight on it or blast it with the Elements of Harmony and hope for the best," shouldn't he have realized he was being redundant there? Blasting it with the Elements is essentially the same as siccing Twilight on it.
Twilight: "wai...whu...!?"
Like if You think she'll get hentai'd by Him later on. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )
Is definitely Changelings trying to drive Luna crazy.
Boom, I just ruined a sub-plot twist.
Woo!~ This will be the second time i'v gotten to read a story that has characters go to Zebrica/Zebrabwe.
7921754 Yeah it was pretty bad it but TANKS for the effort
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No lights on the deck after (pretty-much) sun down? These are similar to the undead pirates from the Pirates of the Carribean arent they?
Zecora and Star Horn siting a hut, F, U, C, K, I, N, G, all day long!
This story is amazing. Wish the updates were more consistant tho
7922512 I SHIP IT!!
7922555 I wish I could put up a new chapter every week, but that's just not possible.
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Let no joyous voice be heard,
let no man look up to the sky with hope,
and let this day be cursed,
by we who ready to wake
THE KRAKEN!!
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Sharing a bunk, hmm?
HUZZAH! UPDATE! The next few chapters should be fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Loving this.^^ ...wonder if he can play for the sailors a new tune that they'll love, from Pirates of the Carribean. XD
7922960 I dunno. This song sounds appropriate XD
7922973 He could always do both. XD
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My hope he's back in time for the wedding, but with a "tamed" beast to kick some 'ling ass around. Would excuse his mauling of the drakes, i guess. Or maybe he could heal them as reparations with his wild magic.
Not gonna lie, I seriously thought you weren't gonna put Trixie on that boat.
Just don't take to long out at sea like some other writer....
7921944 It'll be the next Diaries of a Madman, god damn it! Didn't you know that we need another story that will end up being 4.7 million words long?
7923163 So I shouldn't make it that long? or I should make it that long? I'm confused.
While traveling through Zebrica. Aeron needs to start humming songs from Lion King.
And honestly, I almost feel sorry for any idiots who attack a boat with Trixie and Aeron on board.
Hmmm, was Celestia a victim of a Changeling or a Nightmare???? Not sure, but Nightmare seems more likely.
Lots of foreshadowing in this chapter.
Nice work.
As long as theirs story to be had make t as long as you want! I'm ready for more, was a good chapter.
So, could Aaron make himself travel size like this?
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7923668 he could, yes. Without a body his core is about the size of an orange.
Just a guess but I think it was a changling that was appearing as Nightmare then turned into Flash.